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Doom's Ladder

Ascending to heaven with pride*, we create ladder for failure’s doom. *Proverbs 16:18 Pride goeth before destruction, and an haughty spirit before a fall. April 27, 2021 1st place, "Paradox of Life" Monoku Poetry Contest Sponsored by JCB Brul; judged on 4/30/2021.

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Date: 5/4/2021 3:33:00 AM
A wise one... Congratulations on your win
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Date: 4/30/2021 10:37:00 PM
Congrats, Beata ~ well done
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Date: 4/30/2021 4:05:00 PM
VERY nicely expressed . A true paradox, Beata and congratulations
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Date: 4/30/2021 8:47:00 AM
Yes, and that's a long way to fall. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/30/2021 6:48:00 AM
Hi Beata, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/30/2021 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations!
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