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Don'T You Dare Wake Me

Arm in arm, cuddled together in your warm bed Pure heaven, as on your bosom I rest my head Satin sheets, you in lace, bringing a smile to this face Heartbeats felt upon my chest, your body my fingers trace Eyes closed, caressing each other by feel and by touch Soft kisses to your neck, whispering "I love you so much" Passion abound, warmth I seek, we are turning up the heat Kisses getting deeper, longer, as one our hearts now beat Needed comfort, needing to get closer, needing to be near The scent of love is in the air, as all my troubles disappear Desire, wanting you. things getting wild, feeling the steam Rooster crowing, don't you dare wake me from this dream

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Samuel Otieng

Date: 3/14/2018 12:45:00 PM

Lovely write.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2014 9:13:00 AM

I hope it becomes your reality! Perhaps you are already living the dream. I enjoyed this passionate write Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2014 10:11:00 AM

Thanks Richard...with my kids I am..still working on the other part...cheers

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2014 8:52:00 PM

wow, this one is AWESOME, Tim!!! love it.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/31/2014 9:19:00 PM

Thanks Andrea....Did you get a lot of trick or treaters tonight? ...hugs Tim

J. R. Corbin

Date: 10/28/2014 10:08:00 AM

Love those steamy dreams, Tim. The older I get, the more I have, lol.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 10:11:00 AM

Thanks JR. Same here

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/27/2014 6:57:00 AM

Wonderful dream, I had the same one last night :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 6:59:00 AM

Hehe...that is a great dream :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/27/2014 5:37:00 AM

Tim, I wish this dream to become a reality for you soon! What a dreamy verse! Absolutely magnificent! A seven from me!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 7:02:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios. I do wish so too.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/27/2014 4:22:00 AM

oh, i woke up after the last line!! love it and very nice flow, Tim!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Hija my dear sweet friend.... Hugs Tim

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/27/2014 4:18:00 AM

Beautiful dream and painted well. Enjoyed. Tfs

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 7:00:00 AM

Thank you Ravi .....cheers Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/27/2014 1:43:00 AM

You see, thats what happens for moving to the country, to that far away farm Tim. Lol.... Country air is great to ones health and peace, but then you have those darn roosters ....;) now, seriously, I liked your poem, nicely penned my dear friend Tim. Hugs! And have a nice and safe week ahead(minus the rooster or roosters, better get an alarm clock;) hahahaaa ha...love and light! xxx D.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 3:50:00 AM

Thank you Dorian my dear....hugs Tim

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/26/2014 9:35:00 PM

Hey that was no rooster that was me, and by the way are dates left, and our wallets are gone too!!!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2014 11:32:00 PM

Luckily they left the tix to tonights Habs game ....we have to enjoy them before their collapse I'm told

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2014 7:01:00 PM

OH shucks, that is how dream end, just to spoil everything. I don’t know what is going on with the computer or if it’s the web – site, but I did get your message on the e-mail but not on the site. I feel you should write a poem on the Red Rose with Thorns, I am not a romantic and I think you could do a very nice write about it. :) eve

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2014 7:06:00 PM

I will try to work on it sometime this week...thanks Eve...hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/26/2014 4:34:00 PM

Ghost is good!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/26/2014 4:27:00 PM

Excellent Poem! Don't worry Timmy, I am not a dream.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2014 4:29:00 PM

I thought you were a ghost...hehe

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/26/2014 3:00:00 PM

Ah, I really loved this one Tim. Some dreams should just never end.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2014 3:02:00 PM

Thanks Brenda.. I am living a dream that I never had on the soup...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/26/2014 12:05:00 PM

Ow gee that rooster..Maybe you should cook it for thanksgiving : ).Lovely poem?Did I read passion and Love?This is getting deep.Sweet Dream indeed!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2014 12:08:00 PM

:)...yes anything can happen in a dream....hugs Tim

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 10/26/2014 10:16:00 AM

That rooster needs a good choking, get it! :) Awesome poem friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2014 10:19:00 AM

Yes it does...hence that is why it is in there.....cheers

Cupids Arrow

Date: 10/26/2014 9:49:00 AM

Such a beautiful dream..Noone would ever want to wake up from such a dream Tim: )..lovely!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2014 9:53:00 AM

no they wouldn't...hehe..hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2014 9:30:00 AM

Oh I too just hate being woken from a wonderful dream - hopefully one day Tim it will be reality and not a dream for you my friend:-) Great write full of hope for the future:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2014 4:45:00 PM

lol Maurice:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/26/2014 4:25:00 PM

I go back to sleep and pick up where I left off. Exactly the same. She is still saying no!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2014 9:34:00 AM

LOL I do that true - I agree it's never the same is it:-( hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2014 9:33:00 AM

Thanks Jan.....I always wake up and try to get back in the dream but it never seems the same....hugs Tim