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Don'T Want To Live Don'T Want To Die

I don't want to live Yet I don't want to die I'm trapped in a living hell I can't move forward No matter how I try My feet are set in concrete My mind confused Foggy not sure what is real no more i feel a thousand cuts of intense pain Emanating from my core. No love in my life I wither Silent tears flow like a river Climbing a new mountain everyday Watching others getting on happy Upon my way. Tormented haunted by my horrific past Dreams and hopes just shards of glass Won't Someone take my hand and lead me to a world I understand and can finally breath out And live I have so much love to give. The walls are closing in. Peter Dome. Copyright..2016.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/26/2016 10:09:00 AM

Hi Peter, You have penned such a sad write with raw emotions. You are not alone, many have felt this way at one point in their life. I am one of them.I don't feel that way now. You may not see it now, but up ahead there are brighter days my friend. But in the mean time take my hand: -) Alexis

Peter Dome
Date: 12/26/2016 11:31:00 AM

Hi Alexis. Thank you so much you are my rock. You give me hope. Much appreciated. Pete. X.