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Don'T Try If You Can'T Make

DON"T TRY IF YOU CAN"T MAKE
Tall trees shake hard Leaves fly like bird They dance in glee Wind makes them free. Don’t make your mind Lone tree of wild If it can’t waltz When dire storms surge. Nests fall on ground Chicks are not found Sad birds still sing In ruins storms bring. Don’t make your heart A raged bird hurt If it can’t sing In squall on wing. Blue waves heave high Break on shore dry When slate sky falls Sea in joy rolls. Don’t make your mind Sore sea in grind If it can’t ride Surge of time tide. Burst stream carves hills On banks flood spills It leaps in fall Glide doesn’t stall. Don’t make your life Strayed stream in strife If it can’t flow When times plunge low.
February 2, 2018.

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:37:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Subimal - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/15/2018 11:56:00 PM
Thank you, Greg.
Date: 2/6/2018 7:26:00 PM
A beautiful poem Subimal, of sharp contrasts and lively imagery mirroring life and nature. Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/7/2018 2:16:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your nice comments.
Date: 2/5/2018 11:37:00 AM
Beautiful poem ... Congratulations on your fine win ...
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/6/2018 12:32:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 2/5/2018 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/6/2018 12:31:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 2/5/2018 7:28:00 AM
Congrats on your win Subimal
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/6/2018 12:31:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 2/4/2018 7:02:00 PM
Subimal, I like the way you contrast the trials of nature with our human trials. Well done with vibrant imagery. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/5/2018 1:23:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 2/4/2018 5:21:00 PM
I enjoyed the sharpness of the imagery in your poem, Subimal. It reminded me of the haiku style. Well done and congrats on your win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/5/2018 1:24:00 AM
Thank you, Line. Your poem is also very nice.
Date: 2/4/2018 3:35:00 PM
Great message in your poem Subimal.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/5/2018 1:25:00 AM
Thank you, SO for liking the poem.

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