Don'T Tell My Heart How To Write

In a world where we are constantly told how we should do this and that, 
we must learn to thank them for their opinions…but, to listen to our own 
hearts and THINK for ourselves. 

There is a difference between guidance & being told what to do; where 
opinions are sometimes, sadly, just glorified pre-judgments in hiding. In this 
world today, more than ever, we must stand our ground and water our seeds 
with our own heartbeats. 

Because in the time one could spend listening to loud/louder/loudest opinions 
of why one should or shouldn’t do it someone else's way, one could have 
already done it their own way. Always move in the direction of time:  
Forward

...

Another herd of evaporated soliloquies
Flashing warning signs of good-will
Unto the lost

The deaf
The mute
The righteously blind

They simply ask for a sip of strenuous cognac
To lighten regurgitated burdens

Yet, throats become condensed with 
Good intentions
Under a cratered moon, afflicted with two-faced vertigo

How can one stand in the face of adversity
When our legs are kicked from the same foundations
That opinion’s high court built

How can I be told to write with syllabic serenity
When a rambunctious rhyme 
Would be the socialized death of me

“Guided” by educated parchments, recycled without signatures

…

If poetry is freedom,
Why do critics scream in beer-battered rings of opulent contradictions?

If poetry is freedom,
How is one frowned upon for speaking the word of Life, the word of God

The same God who told us to speak upon epiphanies’ climactic pain
Towards the same “heaven”,
They swear,
They’ll arrive at.

©Drake J. Eszes 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duncan Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 1:02 AM
I always like your words, a seven for sure :)
Ober Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 8:34 AM
Well, hello there, old friend! I am glad I chose this poem of yours to read today. I love that you used your own unique form of poetry to articulate this particular issue. Would be even better to hear it read in your rhythmic way :)
Tacito Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Email sent. ;)
Ober Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 2:31 PM
I can't find your email address :( Do you still have mine? Shoot me an email! Are you still doing your radio shows??
Tacito Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Holy crap!!! HI!!!!! I thought you disappeared for good! Email me, we must catch up!! :D How unexpectedly cool!!! And thank you too!!! Perhaps you can hear it soon enough! YAY!
Candy Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 2:47 PM
This one made me speechless, DD. Really is a honest and amazing well-written poem :))
Tacito Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 11:35 PM
Hey stranger, PS. It's good to see you around again. Thanks very much!
Richards Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Fantastic well written poem
Tacito Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 12:19 AM
Thanks, Lisa!
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 2:09 PM
GEESHH!~ this is sooooo GOOD! I love it when poets cut the B/S and break it down to the nitty-grits~ I am soo glad you addressed problem w/ the soup. I just post a rant poem on that last nite!~ IF you are serious about that poetry convention...I am involved in many poetry endeavor with dozens of participants all over the world! I bleed for literacy as I can tell you do too! You OWNED the Stage today! I AM SOO PROUD OF YOU. I TOO, AM OVULATING!~ LET ME KNOW WHAT I CAN DO TO HELP THE CAUSE!~
Tacito Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Yes sir! I'll have to have a look at your poem for sure! LOL ovulations for all! We'll be in touch! Cheers, Roboto! :D
Deschler Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Some people just waste away there lives trying to achieve perfection, when perfection does not exist.... Having the freedom to be unique is the only way forward, and you have always been on the right path, Drake! It is great to see you back and writing again! Awesome poem!
Tacito Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:25 AM
Yeah, they do. That's very kind of you to say about me, Kelly. Thanks so much! :)
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 12:55 PM
- Poetry is freedom ................ It's your or my thoughts ...... words comes from your or my heart .............. do not tell me something else !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Tacito Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 12:58 PM
ANNE LISE! :) Yup, precisely! Thank you so much!!!!
Bateson Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 12:57 PM
You must beat to your own drum. Too bad some are not confident enough to do their own thing or say their own words. Your words hit home today as we were just talking about being bullied into doing things you do not want to do.
Tacito Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:03 PM
I do. I even play the keys to my own piano. ;) And, yes, it is too bad allow fear to deplete ones' self-confidence. I'm glad this hit home. The things I read that triggered this writing hit home for me too. It was unexpectedly disappointing. That said, thank you so much, Betty!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 10:39 AM
This could be a great blog. I have always been impressed with what you have to say. Those who wish to censor others rarely have anything of value to say themselves. As always I appreciate your individuality.
Tacito Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 11:01 AM
It could be, yes. But, I won't be dedicating funds to PS again. So, this will have to do. As for the "censor" statement, yes, you're quite right. That means a lot, Richard. You rock all of this century!
Sirak Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Hi Drake, I have been patiently waiting to be awed by you again (and you never disappoint) "Another herd of evaporated soliloquies" Wow! The voices of the critics ride the winds, but hot air always rises and we are left standing in a cool breeze of freedom following the gentle tug of our hearts.
Tacito Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:53 AM
My dear, Monterey!!!! How awesome to see you around again. You said it so so well! Thank you for getting this! :) Hot air does rise, indeed...
Breidenthal Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 10:41 PM
I love this poem. How inspiring Drake!! I have missed reading your work. This one is fantastic!! "more than ever, we must stand our ground and water our seeds with our own heartbeats" Get out of here! Love this piece. I'll be back ;) Fav for sure. Always, Laura
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 11:07 PM
LAURAAAAAA!!! :D I've missed you & your work! How are you?? So awesome to see you around!
Goff Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 7:53 PM
Beer-batteted rings of opulent contradictions...niiiice!
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:05 PM
When I started forming that line, I thought of onion rings. Then, it got all twisted from there. My mind is a hilarious conundrum, sometimes. :) Now I want french fries...
Goff Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 7:51 PM
Hi Drake! Love it! The best in my opinion is when I adore somethin' I've written....and seem to be the only one! ('cept Ma...she adores all my poems!) There is a singular awkwardness that accompanies this sensation that is quite satisfying! So when my work is received well....I lift my upper-lip a bare centimeter! Jimbo
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:04 PM
JIMMMMBOOOOO! It only takes one person to make all the difference when we express ourselves. In your case, your Ma is truly your greatest fan. That hits home for me. Much love to you, sir.
Carrillo Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 7:01 PM
I couldn't agree with you more on this. Why should anyone tell us how to do things, or how to write what we feel. I believe all poets write from the heart. Thanks for sharing this with us... Lucilla
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:00 PM
Absolutely!!! This is Poetry! Yet, sometimes, all I see are hypocritical stanzas filled w/good intentions from those who think they know what's right for another. Sigh, will their egotistical smiles know no limits? Sad. It has to be from the heart. Always. And thank YOU, Lucilla, for understanding the big picture here. You'll be in my thoughts!
Courtney Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:03 PM
I like your poems and hope your well
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Hey there, Ruth. It's been a long while. How have you been? Thanks very much.
Chircop Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:06 PM
Poetry is freedom,and I love the way your heart beats and bleeds with no restrictions.Well said!!!Powerful!!! Once I've written a poem called 'Simple words for simple people'..Tried to give the same message you are giving...But this is much more powerful and to the point.Excellent thoughts penned.Just be who you are,its more than the best.
Tacito Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Always. ;)
Chircop Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 4:35 PM
: ) labels .. I'm ovaltine with mik..Hope that's ok : )
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Damn double comments, sorry! lol Hi & thank you, darling Charmaine! That's all it takes. Just be you in your words. :) xoxoxoxo
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Cheers & good to meet you! The only that truly matters is how well you write from the heart. Respect what others say, if it's a "suggestion". But, at the end of the day, writing from the heart is the way to truly embrace the core of Poetry. Say no to labels. They're no good for ones' blood pressure. Thanks again!
Christensen Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Thank you for sharing this! Your words really speak out to me. I don't normally use rhyming, I don't write sonnets, I hardly ever count syllables, I am not good at limericks, I just learned what a villanelle is etc. etc. I find it extremely hard to put labels on what I write. I just enjoy the enormous freedom writing offer and poetry especially. I will be reading more of what you have written, I know that for sure.
Christensen Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:36 PM
Hello, sorry I completely forgot the greeting! I suppose I was too much into your poem. Very well said, it's the honest messages from the heart and mind that matters. I try to choose the best ones and pen them down. And I am not afraid of criticism as far as my poems go. I am more scared of labels. Thank you again!
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Cheers & good to meet you! The only that truly matters is how well you write from the heart. Respect what others say, if it's a "suggestion". But, at the end of the day, writing from the heart is the way to truly embrace the core of Poetry. Say no to labels. They're no good for ones' blood pressure. Thanks again!
Manassian Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Oh Drake...YOU TELL THEM! YOU TELL THEM ALL! Oh..so good to read you again....I've missed you heaps! HERE YOU ARE!!! Your syllabic serenity..IS YOUR style. Hon...it's YOUR kind of writing that SELLS these days! Though I do love rhyme...I know it's not your heart beat. It takes all kinds. Good to have you here...HUGSSSSSSS with a good dose of lasagna!
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 12:37 PM
I shall. Promise. ;) You've been missed too! Making my face full of man-blushes! LOVE IT! Keep it coming! Yes, it really does take all kinds. Geez. lol Thank you, dear Eileen.
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