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Don'T Say Goodbye

Don't cry,don't say goodbye. just take a deep breath and look to the sky. there are no answers there,no need to wonder why. just count the stars, and let the beauty dry your eyes. you are loved in many ways, like how your eyes glow with hope, or when you silently pray i know it may be hard to cope and i don't know what to say. i cant just say it'll get better because who knows,life has many ways, only you can change the path, only you can make it better, but i can promise you this, ill be here the whole way, ill be here to help you through the ups and downs, i promise,to not let you drown. 'cause i do care. i will help you bare, with the hell some of us call life. so,please stay alive. don't let death win. lets stay in this sick reality,together. where the world spins, and hearts break. but by saving you. that's one less life to take . - this was my very first poem,so i know its not the best. thank you for reading. stay strong

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Date: 10/6/2019 10:03:00 AM
Love this. Excellent write. Ann
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Date: 5/9/2016 10:19:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Wolf... linda
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Date: 11/16/2015 10:59:00 PM
Wolf Zeppelin, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:35:00 PM
Hi Wolf, this is such an excellent first posted piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/13/2015 8:24:00 PM
Good poem, for a first... WOLF Z., , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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