Don'T Look Back

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When pain hits you hard And leaves your heart all scarred. Remember these are only temporary things, That just for a short period will sting. Don't let things in life Get you down for too long, filled of strife, Search always for life's sunny side, And don't get caught by all the storms and tides. Don't look behind you, all the time, But carefully hear your heart's rhyme, When pain gets so hard for you to bear, Remember that God cares and dry all your tears. Dorian Petersen Potter aka Ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,23,2014

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Jack Ellison

Date: 11/20/2014 4:00:00 PM

Oh my dear sweet Dorian, this is simply gorgeous! What an wonderful way to get through life with this positive upbeat attitude! Loving hugs, your friend, Jack XXX

Paul Callus

Date: 11/19/2014 4:42:00 PM

Very sound advice, Dorian. When we stumble we have to pick ourselves up; He is always there ready to help us back on our feet. /x/ paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:33:00 PM

Hi Paul! Thank you so much for dropping by! :) xxxx D.