Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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Don'T Let Her Steal Your Heart Away

Like a thief in the night she stole your heart
But I’ve seen the way you look at her  ...
It was simply love at first sight
She has curves in all the right places
You simply can’t keep your hands off her
I can no longer compete for your attention
Ladies....
Why do we have to suffer when men get a new car!

12th August 2015

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James Fraser October 10, 2015 at 2:56 PM Your range is wonderful Jan xx Phew, Haha! I don't drive. My purse is for different curves that so deserve for I to serve. But she sure drives me crazy in my heart / hugs // James xx Jan Allison October 10, 2015 at 2:58 PM I love writing with a twist James and this was one of those poems crying out for a twist - so glad the love of your life has those curves to drive you crazyyyyyyyyyyy:-) hugs jan xx

Mama Bear August 17, 2015 at 10:11 AM Imagine being replaced by a car. Hope it was a new model LOL their life expectancy is not great. He will pay for that rejection but not too much I hope Loved the laugh Love and hugs Edith Richard had the right answer clever man Jan Allison August 17, 2015 at 12:02 PM Richard is a very wise man indeed Mama bear - thanks for the lovely comment:-) purely a fiction write I was in a hotel room in Dublin when I wrote this lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Cottrell August 17, 2015 at 8:39 AM Interesting way of putting it. Very nice poem. Jan Allison August 17, 2015 at 8:44 AM Thanks James:-) hugs jan xx

Rachel Preston August 13, 2015 at 4:34 PM Roald Dahl strikes again with the twist :-) xx Jan Allison August 13, 2015 at 4:39 PM My next one isn't at all twisted lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Edlynn Nau August 13, 2015 at 2:44 AM Thanks for making me chuckle! I was surprised at the end and was off guard for the curve you threw! Dead mans curve! Fun! Jan Allison August 17, 2015 at 12:00 PM You can edit your comments Edlynn - go to member area at the top left of the page and 'my outboxes' and you can amend your comments there:-) hugs Jan xx Edlynn Nau August 13, 2015 at 6:09 PM Flash: they SERIOUSLY need an Edit Option HERE! Should read (below) I LOVE fun surprises! OCD! I hate typos, spelling errors, grammar errors. Please call me on those. I encourage it. We must be each other's editors! I WANT an edit here! Sigh! Edlynn Nau August 13, 2015 at 6:06 PM Well I life fun surprises and who doesn't enjoy a laugh! That element of surprise ALWAYS strikes fear or laughter! Jan Allison August 13, 2015 at 7:18 AM Thanks Edlynn I do like to write the odd poem with a twist at the end:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2015 at 8:57 AM Ha ha, that was a pleasant surprise! Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 9:21 AM Oh I love your reply to Nette - you are a VERY wise man Richard! :-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud August 12, 2015 at 8:23 AM guys adore their cars more than any woman... that's for sure; an automobile will always be a part of them, lol... you stunned me; nice, jan.. huggs Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2015 at 9:00 AM I enjoy cars but I enjoy the beautiful curves of my sweetie far more. I've traded in many cars but will never stop loving and cherishing my sweetie. Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 8:51 AM Just a fiction write Nette - but I can imagine it would hit home with some women ... and how can you compete with those curves ... unless they get dented lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian August 12, 2015 at 7:41 AM I was about to pontificate about the inability of a woman to steal a heart....men willingly give it, when you turned the tables on me, Jan. Good one!!! Hugs Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 8:50 AM Just a fun write Eileen - its total fiction by the way - iwrote it in our hotel room last night lol:-) hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper August 12, 2015 at 4:25 AM Hi Jan, yeah you got me too. Your one clever tricksy lady. Your poetry rocks !,!!!! LOL ANOTHER INTO FAVOURITES AND OF COURSE A 7 love Shane xxx Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 4:30 AM Thanks Shane - It's all total fiction we are actually in a hotel in Dublin at the moment - just have to go with the flow of my muse:-) hugs Jan xx

Ian Jones August 12, 2015 at 2:24 AM lol! Boys and toys I think they term it as being in touch with your inner child not to mention justifying spending extra on what you wanted rather than what you needed. Ha Ha! Kind regards, Ian Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 2:55 AM Just a fun write Ian we are actually staying in a hotel in Dublin at the moment - total fiction on my part:-) Hugs Jan xx

Theresa Cw August 12, 2015 at 12:05 AM Ha ha ha!! ya gave me a great chuckle at the end Jan, I was expecting that kind of ending.... hugs Theresa Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 2:54 AM Thanks Theresa:-) hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker August 11, 2015 at 9:30 PM you got me, great twist Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 2:54 AM Thanks Frederic i do appreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer August 11, 2015 at 6:59 PM ha! very funny, jan! you are a master at these sneaky endings! Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 2:51 AM I love to have fun with them Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith August 11, 2015 at 6:45 PM lol...nice twist Jan...that will be me in a few months...haven't had that since my Mustang convertible had to get rid of it after the first kid...2 car seats wouldn't fit...lol Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 2:51 AM You know me for being twisted Tim - am actually sitting in a hotel room in Dublin ... our mode of transport is our feet and the bus lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance August 11, 2015 at 6:38 PM take the keys when he's asleep and put some miles on those tires! :) Jan Allison August 11, 2015 at 6:43 PM Total fiction write Cas lol I am actually sitting in a hotel room in Dublin lol:-) hugs jan xxx