Donkey of Each Night

Starved, the wild donkey of each night
Still carries so incredible much light,
On his back, in old tattered sacks,
With sweat dreams of hay stacks;
Sometimes, they hard tempt him to stop
But, never had he turned his head to crop.
  
Many wonder how he can resist a day.
But, in a hurry he goes on his way 
Making a path to the old mountain:
His eyes, like a summer-dried fountain,
Rest in the shadow, while on his back
The light is still flowing from the sack.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/27/2016 2:51:00 PM
Persistently loyal to the task at hand, God bless these dutiful steadfast creatures. Nice imagery, 'His eyes, like a summer-dried fountain", makes me think of their of their large, burnished, earth toned eyes. Enjoying this write, thanks for sharing your clever thoughts! Mikki
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Date: 3/2/2016 11:12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing Ovidiu, enjoyed this.
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Date: 2/14/2016 9:53:00 PM
I have no idea, how to express my feeling! I love it without knowing why... I don't understand it, but I feel PAIN!! It seems that you go house to house in order to sought for proof...
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Date: 2/8/2016 11:50:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..There are many people all over the world who each day who have to fight the fight of hard work entwined not enough to eat..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ovidiu Bocsa
Date: 2/8/2016 2:03:00 PM
Tks for visit.I admire you in many respects.Best wishes.
Date: 2/7/2016 7:31:00 PM
Who is beLinda
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Ovidiu Bocsa
Date: 2/8/2016 2:38:00 AM
I think in Spanish it means: beautiful...Also,it was an English movie about a man too busy who observed some changes in his wife behavior, she having long walks in the city.So he paid a detective to find if Belinda has a friend as he had supposed. After a while, the detective reported she would love somebody indeed, it was just a strange happening while himself following her everywhere to find her secret, they (thus the detective and she) fell in love, but kind of innocent love and the businessman could eventually win again the love by playing with her in the same innocent way
Date: 2/7/2016 9:58:00 AM
OVIDIU, WELL DONE. LINDA
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Ovidiu Bocsa
Date: 2/7/2016 2:46:00 PM
Belinda...
Date: 2/1/2016 5:58:00 AM
Insightful and profound writing, dear Ovidiu! A seven!
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Ovidiu Bocsa
Date: 2/2/2016 8:21:00 AM
Tks for your kind visit.
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