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Doing Things Co-Jointly

People asked where my kookiness comes from Make sure I'm ready as they escape through my bum Lost some down the toidy Hard doing things co-jointly When it happens, have to block 'em with my thumb

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Judith S

Date: 1/3/2018 12:47:00 PM

hahahahahahahahahah !!!!!! THIS is a good one!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/3/2018 2:34:00 PM

A bit rude though don't ya think.... I mean the thumb in the bum reference! LOL That's a lotta hahas!!! merci... xxx

Silent One

Date: 1/2/2018 7:55:00 AM

Big bad Jack was ever so cocky, trained to be a boxer just like Rocky. When it came to walk the walk, confidence turned to shock! Knocked out with one punch - all talkie talkie!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/2/2018 8:14:00 AM

Now that was rather uncomplimentary methinks!!!!! I'll have you know even champion boxers cower in fear at the mere sight of my manly ageing physique!!! YEE HAW!!!

Silent One

Date: 1/2/2018 7:46:00 AM

Hahaha... your kookiness comes from your bum? lol.

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/2/2018 7:54:00 AM

Mainly!!! LOL GOOD MORNING OH GREAT SILENT ONE!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/2/2018 7:31:00 AM

Kookie, Kookie, lend me your comb//On the Sunset Strip I roam//seventy-seven//or seven-eleven?//What's the address of that show's home? KOOK ON CAPTAIN KANGAROOK!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/2/2018 7:37:00 AM

Methinks it was George Burn!!! No? Uh George Bush!!! No? Sir George Floppaloppados!!!