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Doggy Gratitude

Flames, smoke, puppy cries
Ashen angel appears
Loving kiss of thanks

- Entry into Joyce Johnson's "Doggy Gratitude" contest

Copyright © Shawn Sackman | Year Posted 2011

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Poet Destroyer A

December 21, 2012 at 10:41 PM

Shawn, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

Poet Destroyer A

December 17, 2012 at 3:32 PM

Reading this haiku again... thank you for the nice and enjoyable haiku. very deep, with a good outcome..pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 23, 2011 at 4:45 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Joyce's contest Shawn. Love, Carol

February 5, 2011 at 6:06 AM

Many congratulations Shawn on your win in Joyce's contest with this little gem....:)

February 4, 2011 at 5:03 PM

Congratulations on your win. I think this is more of a senryu than a haiku. Nevertheless, you have a good entry here.

February 4, 2011 at 1:56 PM

Hi Shawn - Congratulations on your win in Joyce's contest. Best wishes, Kory

February 4, 2011 at 12:38 PM

Beautiful Haiku!Congrats on your win Shawn !--kashinath

February 4, 2011 at 9:46 AM

Perfection! Many congrats on your well deserved win, Shawn Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 9:44 AM

Very nice haiku, Shawn. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2011 at 8:00 AM

Congrats Shawn on your HM in Joyce's contest with this wonderful write and entry luv.. enjoy your special honor with luv..

February 4, 2011 at 7:31 AM

Shawn, good to see your success inb Joyce's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

February 3, 2011 at 10:55 PM

Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Joyce's "Doggy Gratitude" Contest, Shawn. Always, Annalise

February 3, 2011 at 10:26 PM

lovely Haiku Shawn. Thank you for entering. Love, Joyce

January 23, 2011 at 8:26 PM

A good short and sweet way to describe what's in the photograph.

January 23, 2011 at 3:49 PM

Reads like a winner..Good luck..So much said in so few words..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

January 23, 2011 at 3:46 PM

Good luck in the contest,, Shawn,,,p.d.

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