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Doggie At Christmas Time

A wiggly holiday bundle of energy Snickers, my pup, wears a Rudolf outfit for fun-- Annoyed with long antlers, she grinds around ripping an outlandish costume, then fiercely bobbing her tail; while kids stick red bells along a furred neck: Our dachshund yelps and fumbles on stacked presents, as the camera rolls --- a keepsake of eve’s laughter… But weenie goes hysterical from the raucous causing mayhem under the ornate lights— A zoom, a wham, Snickers digs into wrapped tokens unraveling boxes, oh now tarnished from her hunt— Till slashing that itchy reindeer crotch, dear doggie fetches an opened gift— a costly vase to fill up her pee! ......................... 12/28/2018 Christmas Pets - Writing Challenge December 2018 Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 1/1/2019 6:33:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sweet poem of Christmas disaster with the pets, well done ~
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Date: 12/31/2018 11:50:00 PM
Cute, Nette, congratulations on your win. Happy New Year's
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Date: 12/31/2018 10:02:00 AM
Snickers invites same from the reader---along with lots of chuckles! Dandy candy, nette! Congrats on your win in the contest, and Happy 2019! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 12/30/2018 8:22:00 PM
A cheery image to envision Nette! Animal antics can have us roaring with laughter. They do bring such joy. Best of luck in the contest! Have a very happy New Year Nette! Blessings, Connie : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/30/2018 2:49:00 PM
Hello Nette, this is such a cute poem. It made me laugh. My sister's dog also opens her own gifts. We always have a good laugh when she opens up her's and others's. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/30/2018 1:58:00 AM
This is great, brings back memories of my dog snoopy. Happy Newyear Nette.
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Date: 12/29/2018 11:49:00 PM
This is a darling of a delight to read! Your dog has the same name as Andrea's, I believe. With each line, the images grew more vivid in my mind which I enjoyed. Last line, 'fill up' or 'fill with' - I thought the keyboard might have gotten you there. Honey, I wish you a joy-filled year, heaped with blessings - now make it so. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 12/29/2018 2:52:00 AM
Haha nice verse Nette, can just picture the scene. Hope you had a lovely Christmas. Tom.
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Date: 12/28/2018 5:43:00 PM
So heart-warming, love the 'itchy reindeer crotch' line!
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Date: 12/28/2018 5:10:00 PM
A charming write..playfully articulated story.. a win for you my friend.
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Date: 12/28/2018 5:00:00 PM
I love the wit you expressed in this delightful write, nette! My kind of poetry - Bob
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Date: 12/28/2018 3:40:00 PM
- This one was funny, Nette :))) - This will make a laugh to D.H. also ... best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2018 3:07:00 PM
This is adorable! and funny Nette. Very creative writing :) Thanks for sharing!
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