Doggie At Christmas Time

A wiggly holiday bundle of energy Snickers, my pup, wears a Rudolf outfit for fun-- Annoyed with long antlers, she grinds around ripping an outlandish costume, then fiercely bobbing her tail; while kids stick red bells along a furred neck: Our dachshund yelps and fumbles on stacked presents, as the camera rolls --- a keepsake of eve’s laughter… But weenie goes hysterical from the raucous causing mayhem under the ornate lights— A zoom, a wham, Snickers digs into wrapped tokens unraveling boxes, oh now tarnished from her hunt— Till slashing that itchy reindeer crotch, dear doggie fetches an opened gift— a costly vase to fill up her pee! ......................... 12/28/2018 Christmas Pets - Writing Challenge December 2018 Sponsor: Dear Heart
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La France Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sweet poem of Christmas disaster with the pets, well done ~
Roper Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 11:50 PM
Cute, Nette, congratulations on your win. Happy New Year's
Wolf Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Snickers invites same from the reader---along with lots of chuckles! Dandy candy, nette! Congrats on your win in the contest, and Happy 2019! Best wishes, Gershon
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 8:22 PM
A cheery image to envision Nette! Animal antics can have us roaring with laughter. They do bring such joy. Best of luck in the contest! Have a very happy New Year Nette! Blessings, Connie : ) xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Hello Nette, this is such a cute poem. It made me laugh. My sister's dog also opens her own gifts. We always have a good laugh when she opens up her's and others's. Have a nice day my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 1:58 AM
This is great, brings back memories of my dog snoopy. Happy Newyear Nette.
Godwin Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 11:49 PM
This is a darling of a delight to read! Your dog has the same name as Andrea's, I believe. With each line, the images grew more vivid in my mind which I enjoyed. Last line, 'fill up' or 'fill with' - I thought the keyboard might have gotten you there. Honey, I wish you a joy-filled year, heaped with blessings - now make it so. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Cunningham Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Haha nice verse Nette, can just picture the scene. Hope you had a lovely Christmas. Tom.
Faulkner Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 5:43 PM
So heart-warming, love the 'itchy reindeer crotch' line!
Pandit Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 5:10 PM
A charming write..playfully articulated story.. a win for you my friend.
Hinshaw Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 5:00 PM
I love the wit you expressed in this delightful write, nette! My kind of poetry - Bob
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 3:40 PM
- This one was funny, Nette :))) - This will make a laugh to D.H. also ... best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 3:07 PM
This is adorable! and funny Nette. Very creative writing :) Thanks for sharing!
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