Does Your Heart Share This Moon Tonight

“For in your light I dream, as evening takes my hand” Silently I find my thoughts illumined by your beauty In soft shimmers of dancing silhouettes and patterns allowing far away breaths to sigh Eyes peer into velvet skies, visions set in motion eternally, find me stranded of this distance we share, north to south, longing for you Desperate for but a breeze, a movement of shadow, a hope of wishes made upon the early arrival of this crested view Lonely among the maples, towering soldiers lined at fielded boundaries, claiming wisdom as they too reach for your smile “And I yearn the knowledge of your distant view” Do you think, do you feel, do you dream of me from balconies high above hibiscus footpaths, candle lit in passing moments which flicker, enchant Drinking from a porcelain cup caressed by your hand, a touch my body pleads, soft fingers on smooth surroundings, ripples following moonlight sonatas, days of spring blooms and whimsical showers, flooding affections to wash over me, carry me to you This moon, suspended in charcoal heavens upon a beaded blanket of perfect pearls, beckons our dreams in simultaneous fashion “Does your heart share this moon tonight, with me”
Written for the Long Distance Love - Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Peck Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 2:49 PM
This is a most beautiful poem, Chris. I especially love ".. from balconies high above hibiscus footpaths..." I can just picture that pathway.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Chris, I have returned to read this beauty again. It is your top poem on your best poems list and rightly so! I faved it long ago! I hope you return soon to PS soon. Your beautiful romantic poetry is very much missed by me. I hope you are well? Blessings xxoo
Woodrow Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 2:53 PM
I can see why this is a fave of all the soupers...beautiful write. :)
Green Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 3:04 PM
Thank you again Susan. This is an older one, I am happy you found it and enjoyed it so much. I appreciate your kindness.
Holmes Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 10:46 AM
Chris - a wonderful poem, the last stanza brilliant: "This moon, suspended in charcoal heavens upon a beaded blanket of perfect pearls, beckons our dreams in simultaneous fashion" DHolmes
Green Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thanks so very much David. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Hello Chris a beautifully created poem. When a full moon appears, I stare at it for hours. Because it is beautiful to me. Have a nice day my friend. Peace, Joy Love.
Staton Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 1:40 PM
Nicely written!
Ford Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Oh my goodness this is by far my favorite poem. You took such a simple moment, one I do all the time, and stretched it into such a beautiful piece of imagery. Love your work!!
Green Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Thank you so very much Julia, that is such a nice thing to say. I am thrilled you liked this one so much and I appreciate your visit and kind words to me.
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October 18, 2018 at 12:46 AM
My heart skipped a beat as I choked on your titled last line "Does your heart share this moon tonight, with me" I fear your poems might break me Raw and penetrating. Well done.
Green Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind comment on my poem. I appreciate you finding this one and enjoying it so. Your encouraging thoughts are an inspiration to me.
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September 23, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Congratulations on your win. This poem flows. It has imagery and wonderful feelings that are reminders of love. It was very well written.
Green Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so very much Bette
Da Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Oh, how beautiful this work is. Very cleverly written. I love it..
Green Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so very much Karen
Babbit Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Indeed, it is well shared, well expressed and filled with feeling and emotion. God bless.
Schiavina Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Very beautiful and well written
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so very much Frances.
Lindley Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Brvo, a true free verse gem my friend. And a fav..
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March 6, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Thanks so very much Robert
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January 11, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Easy to see why this poem is listed in the PSoup top 100. Flat out great. 'Nuff said. Love and peace to you, my dear friend.
Green Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 9:02 AM
Thanks so much Freddie
Inman Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Gorgeous write. Chris, your imagery is exceptional in this piece. "This moon, suspended in charcoal heavens upon a beaded blanket of perfect pearls," are beautifully written lines.
Green Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thanks so very much James for these kind words. I appreciate your visit and I am thrilled you liked this one
Stover Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 8:20 PM
I can see why this is number one on the best new poem list. Your words brought a tear to my eye.
Green Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 7:24 AM
Christy, your kind words always bring happy tears to my eyes. Thank you so much, I am thrilled you liked this one.
Yvonne Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 2:29 PM
A stunning brilliant piece of work. An absolute fav for me.
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November 2, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Thank you so much Maurice for your kind words today. I am thrilled you liked this.
Vaso Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:26 PM
I think I am now stating the obvious, when I say this is a beautiful poem, but it was very captivating and a fav.
Green Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 6:02 AM
Thanks so very much Arthur for your kind words.
A   Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 11:12 AM
Beautiful write....pd
Green Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Thanks so very much pd
Kimathi Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 5:45 AM
Congrats Chris, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Green Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Thanks so very much Teddy for your kind words.
Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Just stopping by again, did you know this is #3 on top 100 new poems, you hit this one out of the park! Congrats again this is wonderful!
Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 11:58 AM
check left side of your screen under member poets/poems scroll down to best poems new gives you best new poems top 100, fun to see every day changes.
Green Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thanks so much John. I'm not really sure what that means but it sounds pretty good. : )
White Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 10:50 PM
This is absolutely stunning, the imagery around the moon and all. Congratulations!!!
Green Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 6:11 AM
Thanks so much Darren for your kind words.
Mcgrath Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win. It is absolutely beautiful, and so romantic!
Green Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 6:11 AM
Thank you so much Brenda. I am happy you liked this one
Y. Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Hi Chris, It's no surprise that this beautiful piece is in the top spot, it was so poetic and well written.Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Oh thank you so much Alexis for those kind words. I really appreciate you. I am excited to have won because I read a bunch of the entries and they were all so very good.
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Congrats Chris...great win
Green Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Thanks Tim.
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