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Does Not Matter

I woke and got dressed this morn, but no one knows so it does not matter. 17 syllables confirmed howmanysyllables.com October 11, 2016 Sad One Line for Silent One

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2017 7:52:00 PM

Such loneliness beautifully conveyed in your bittersweet Monoku CayCay. Such genuine deep sentiments expressed so deftly in 17 syllables. Excellent and enjoyed.. Hugs and smiles!

Jannie Breedt

Date: 10/28/2016 1:53:00 PM

It set me off. That Beatle song ".... i read the news today oh boy... the English army had just won the war.."

Lu Loo

Date: 10/13/2016 11:46:00 AM

Oh CayCay, this better be fiction lady..so sadly beautiful...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 11:02:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, CayCay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 10:19:00 AM

Too sad, congratulations CayCay...upd

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/12/2016 7:28:00 AM

A bitter-sweet Monoku well expressed with a deep meaning dear, CayCay!

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/12/2016 7:16:00 AM

I can relate! Very sad CayCay

Darren White

Date: 10/11/2016 11:29:00 PM

Some days I am sitting up in my bed, and do not even make it to getting dressed. The sitting up alone is an accomplishment! Such a heartfelt one-liner CayCay, it brought tears to my eyes...

Chris Green

Date: 10/11/2016 4:48:00 PM

Sometimes it feels that way, doesn't it? But I guess then there's not a worry if the socks match or not. A very lonely line.