Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

Docking the Wogs

What a dunny say, think I'll dock the wogs
they're my curry funpanions, all the lay dong.
One is a lellow yab, the other a barge loxer
who fisses my kace, with slenty of plobber!

"Dood gay!" we say, as we droll sound the street
grappily heating the polks that we feet.
Many smolks file, as we balk why
linging out sound, under bunny slue skies.

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Jeffrey Leiser May 12, 2016 at 1:28 PM Love this!!! ; ) Laura Leiser May 12, 2016 at 9:15 PM Thanks, Jeffrey! Spoonerisms are crazy fin :)

Timothy Hicks March 30, 2016 at 11:01 AM You wid dell here, Laura Leiser (don't tell anyone but I just spoonerified your name) .... great to see this on the winner's list.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 29, 2016 at 2:41 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write dear Laura.. Laura Leiser March 29, 2016 at 6:13 PM Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Janice Canerdy March 28, 2016 at 10:38 PM This is great, Laura. Congrats on your win. Janice Laura Leiser March 29, 2016 at 6:12 PM Thanks, Janice:)

Sandra Haight March 28, 2016 at 5:42 PM Very creative and well-done, Laura. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser March 28, 2016 at 10:11 PM Thank you, Sandra :)

Jan Allison March 28, 2016 at 4:56 PM great to read this again Laura - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser March 28, 2016 at 10:11 PM Thanks, Jan :)

Arthur Vaso March 5, 2016 at 10:51 PM I confess after a few glasses of wine, well I got this right off! Laura Leiser March 6, 2016 at 5:57 PM Well...I'm glad it was "clear as mud" to you, Arthur, LOL! :D

Nette Onclaud March 5, 2016 at 11:00 AM so gaily, creatively done, laura..huggs Laura Leiser March 5, 2016 at 10:26 PM Thanks, Nette :)

Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 11:40 PM Laura, this is just great, you inspire me to give it a whirl, wonderful and I am loving this 7 ~ Laura Leiser March 5, 2016 at 10:26 PM Thanks, BW :)

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2016 at 7:51 PM this is FANTASTIC. I hope, I can do as well when i give this a try. Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 9:19 PM Thanks so much, Andrea! I had fun writing it :)

Lindsay Laurie March 4, 2016 at 5:35 PM Very clever and bloody funny Laura - thank you - Lindsay Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 9:19 PM Thanks, Lindsay! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Lin Lane March 4, 2016 at 5:14 PM Adorable! Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 9:20 PM Thanks, Lin. I'm glad you liked it :)

Jan Allison March 4, 2016 at 5:14 PM very clever Laura I managed to decipher this without too much difficulty lol:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser March 4, 2016 at 5:17 PM That's good to hear, Jan! These spoonerisms are such a challenge to do ( for me, at least)! :)