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Do You Remember

Do you remember our first kiss? I asked and you did this without any questions I asked because I thought that it would be pretty I asked because I thought that you were witty But I was mistaken mistaken with you Do you remember our first date? You said "Babe, I must be late" And I said "Don't worry, I'll be waiting for you" Then my best friend called me on the phone She said that she saw you at somebody's show And you weren't unhappy You were with another pretty girl Five years later you came to my own show You're staying in front of stage, in a first row You're staying and lookin' Lookin' only on me I see that you understand that my heart is alright I see that you understand that I'm in love with new guy I think that you understand that I'm happy and loved but without you

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Date: 1/27/2019 2:22:00 AM
From the heart and the poet shines as a way forward is now found. Well worth the read. Best regards David in NZ
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 2/5/2019 3:51:00 PM
Thanks David for the lovely words. All the love to you ?
Date: 7/25/2017 10:29:00 AM
Do you still love the guy?...Thanks for sharing...I enjoy it...
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 7/25/2017 11:54:00 AM
No, I don't love him. I'm not sure that it was a real eternal love.It was the first time when I fall in love, I thought that he was ideal. But I was mistaken.My dad said that he wasn't for me, and he was right as usual)
Date: 7/8/2017 9:09:00 AM
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Date: 7/6/2017 8:21:00 AM
Do your words come from real life experiences? They tell a story that is easy to follow and believe. The strength at the end is the best part.
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 7/6/2017 10:22:00 AM
Hi James, The story was taken completely from my life. It was my reality. Luckily, that painful relationships finished really quickly.Of course, it's obviously that I still have no own shows, but I'm working on it)) Thank you for comment. I do really appreciate it.

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