Do You Remember

Do you remember the creek you and I meandered with. . . those many years ago? Its half-forgotten end has now run dry and vanished like the ferns that used to grow along the border of the glade we two had happily discovered, claimed as ours, and even then, I guess we somehow knew that time was fleet; we picked sweet wild flowers, made friendship garlands. Sunny daffodils were blooms you liked the best. I liked the blue. And then we raced each other up small hills, lay laughing in green grass, friends ever true! I don't run now! I spread a blanket and weave yellow rings, remembering my friend.
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 12:51 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your title,"Do You Remember." It can be fun to remember back to fun times and fun people. Enjoy your win and day............
Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 11:33 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your friend in this lovely English sonnet. Congratulations on your first place win!
Horsman Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 11:14 PM
Queen of the sonnet, this is beauty personified, it as just placed itself in my fav, which to your poetry is a never ending open door....what more can i say... Just copied and pasted this from my original, comment, and still stand by it today,,I'm roaming amidst my favourite poerty, i'm sure i'll be coming across more of yours..Please stay safe.. Harry
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Your English Sonnet was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..Ahh!! Friendship..
Lawless Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:29 AM
It is strange Andrea how we still visit those distant times and places and dwell on the fleeting nature of friendship and time. Nicely done
Krampe Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 9:02 PM
I love this poem, Andrea. There is something magical about childhood friendships and the remembrance is bittersweet; you captured that so well. Congratulations. Agnes
Arnone Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Expertly written, friendship remembrance sonnet. Congrats, Andrea. I really like this one (except for the double spaces). Also, what do you mean by weave yellow rings? :-)
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 7:48 PM
also the rings can refer to the garlands that we were picking the flowers for.
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 7:47 PM
the yellow rings are to make daisy chains! i guess it's done with the stems so they are not that yellow but if they still had the daisy heads on them they would be yellow colored!
Scars Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 2:05 PM
Andrea, love the beautiful imagery...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Parker Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Congratulations my poetic friend, your sonnet painted a vivid picture of young innocence
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your 2nd place win, beautiful written . Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Andrea' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT
Babcock Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Wonderful write. Congrats on your win. love phyl
Lwele Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 3:17 AM
perfect reminder of my childhood.
Komala Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 9:03 PM
..lovely Andrea my sweet poetess... may the sun shines you my warmest hug,, each line of yours is a feast to my eyes and a golden craved to my heart... appreciate much our friendship <3 <3 <3
Lwele Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 6:32 AM
great write.
Kovacs Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 3:40 PM
Congrats on your win. Sorry this is so late. I just figured out how to see the other entries. I'm new here.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 6:36 AM
sorry i am late with congratulations Andy , very unintentional, life and strife grabbed me by the throat but okay now lo,l xx
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 2:32 PM
Memories, like the corners of my mind. :) Couldn't resist. :) This is beautiful Andrea. Just loved going down memory meadow with you. Congrats!
May Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 6:20 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
Bunton Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Congrats!
Roberts Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Congrats Andrea ....Seren
Guzzi Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 1:29 PM
An exceptional sonnet with marvelous flow, rhyming and enjambment! Lovely imagery too. Congratulations on your win!! Best wishes, Keith
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 11:10 AM
congrats on ur win Andrea....:))
Liwayway Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:14 AM
so nice to remember those happy moments with friend...I Congratulations friend Andrea on your win...cheers!! Hugs always, Maria
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