Do You Hear What I Feel

You hold me in the palm of your hand like a bird,
but take heed, for I live in your poems, every word.
To you they're pages bound in glue, without a voice.
And yet, they speak of love to me, your veiled bride,
timidly asking, "Do you wish to change your mind?"

I wait for your answer, whispering, "This shall not be,"
holding my breath and hoping to make you see
that behind my smile, life is but a single word, "You..."

My flowers are withering; my eyes hold back tears,
while you hesitate to say, "Until death do we part."
You hover between truth and a lie as I meekly say,
"My heart knows it will always be you and I."

Here I stand, in a wedding dress, telling my story,
while your eyes search mine as I murmur our vows.
I know you can hear every solemn word I speak, 
but I wonder... do you hear what I feel?



December 1, 2021
Inspired By A Translation Poem Contest
Sponsored by Malabika Ray Choudhury

Based on the translation by Henry A. Smith, 
of 'The Poetess ' by German Poet, Gertrud Kolmar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/14/2021 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. You created a lovely poem! Thank you for participating. Love ~ Mala
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2021 5:34:00 AM
Thanks so very much for the honor of placing in your contest, Mala. It was a challenge that I enjoyed taking.
Date: 12/13/2021 9:42:00 PM
Every line is beautifully created. Your many other poems too are very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:33:00 AM
Thank you very much, Chris.
Date: 12/13/2021 11:00:00 AM
WOW!!! What a write. It is too bad one cannot hear feelings. They hurt just as much as words. Have a great/blessed day.................
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2021 5:33:00 AM
I think it's bad enough to feel hurt, but there is sound heard in weeping. Thank you so very much for your comments, Paula.
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