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Do You Dare

You say one thing, then you change your mind, maybe you're cronic, you have all the signs. I try, and give you, the benefit of the doubt, but just like clockwork, you take a different route. This sort of behavior, brings confusion, and pain, you have my head a spinning, which one of us is sane? I'm starting to record you, I just want you to be aware, maybe you will believe me, lie again, if you dare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/24/2008 7:25:00 AM
You can't teach an old dog new tricks. If he has a bad habit, he's probably always going to. Good write. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 7/22/2008 10:30:00 AM
that is true lying is the worse thing a person can do. i was brought up to tell the truth. my mom could always tell if i was lying, so i started to tell the truth and it became a habit. that is why i can't understand when one person has to lie. this was a great piece of work. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.
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Date: 7/22/2008 6:09:00 AM
You know, the recording may not be a bad idea. Cannot tell you how many times someone either swears I never said anything, or swears they didn't say anything. Hmm. Thanks for the idea. And good luck dear Christy. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/22/2008 4:54:00 AM
Ooh, people have the tendency to stop things when someone is able to show them proof of their wrong doings, yet somehow they'll deny it. Great rhyme and flow in this hard hitting write. Michael
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Date: 7/21/2008 5:45:00 PM
I have always felt that the lie hurts worse the the action it is meant to cover up - Your poem flowed and rhymed perfectly - i wish many blessings Christy
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Date: 7/21/2008 4:58:00 PM
Its hard when pepole lie I am sorry Christy great write good flow and expression! Laura :)
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Date: 7/21/2008 4:47:00 PM
Hi sweet! Good for you hun. We're all right behind you. Take care love... Love Light Truth Patricia
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