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Do You Believe In Angels

Diane, a Christian University student, was visiting some hometown friends while on a summer vacation from College. She was catching up on all the stories her girlfriends and she wanted to share with each other. They got carried away sharing with each other and before you knew it, it was very late. Diane hugged her friends and headed out. She lived several blocks away. It was very dark and she felt somewhat uncomfortable by herself, walking home alone. As she was walking she decided to take a shortcut through an alleyway. Midway through the alley. She felt as though she was being watched! An eerie feeling overtook her. Her emotions were overtaken by uncontrollable fear. She was shocked when from the corner of her eye, she saw a male figure staring directly at her! She immediately felt threatened! He was not just looking. He reminded her of an animal seeking out its prey. The prey was her! Immediately she started praying as she was approaching this male figure. She walked past him and got close enough to get a good look at him. She then started running! Faster than she has ever run before! Seeing her house, she was almost there. She fumbled with her house keys. They felt like a lifetime to find and unlock the front door! Diane felt relieved being behind close doors. She sat down and caught her breath. She grabbed a towel and wiped her sweat from her face. She drank a glass of cold water and laid in bed until finally she was calm enough to allow herself to sleep. The next morning reading the local newspaper, she read where a woman was raped approximately 20 minutes after she had passed through that same alleyway, she had walked through. The newspaper said the police were looking for witnesses. A suspect was arrested and Diane volunteered to pick out the man she had seen that night, from a line up of five men. She picked out the man in the lineup that she had seen. The police further questioned him and he finally admitted to committing the rape. The police thanked Diane and asked her if there was anything they could do for her. Diane said there is one thing. Could you please ask the perpetrator why he didn't attack the first woman he saw in the alleyway. The police asked him. His reply was,"There were two huge tall whitish men on each side of her. That is why!" This story circulated on the internet. Nayda Negron Angels Contest

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Date: 1/6/2016 12:47:00 AM
Michael, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:31:00 PM
MICHAEL, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/3/2016 2:05:00 PM
Thank you for this wonderful story Michael, lovely reading. Congratulations on your win. From Jean
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Date: 1/2/2016 5:05:00 PM
Oh my word Michael! Such a great narrative and the ending was spectacular! Kept me drawn in the whole poem..Very wonderful Michael..God bless :) *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/2/2016 2:22:00 PM
Very interesting story and well written Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/2/2016 6:36:00 AM
Frightening narrative, but with her angel to the rescue. Congratulations on your win, Michael. Sandra
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Michael Tor
Date: 1/2/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Sandra. It was frightening.
Date: 1/1/2016 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations Michael.
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Michael Tor
Date: 1/2/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Nayda...
Date: 11/11/2015 5:51:00 AM
Yes I recall reading about this true incident and believe every word.
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 7:40:00 PM
Incredible story Joan. Angels watch over us.
Date: 10/15/2015 12:16:00 PM
Hi Michael, back to you again. Yes, I was born in Malta, several years after the 2ww ended. Our main language is Maltese, but, from a young age, everybody is taught English at school. Thank you for the compliment:) (Most people also speak fluent Italian.) ~ All the best. // paul
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/15/2015 10:21:00 PM
Paul thank you for sharing. I appreciate the little lesson you shared with me. Thank you for following up. I enjoyed learning some new facts. Its wonderful to be able to communicate with my fellow friends around the World. You are a gentleman and a friend.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2015 4:49:00 PM
Maltese is primarily a Semitic language, but in time it incorporated many romance words, mostly from Italian and English. // I was lucky that I studied Latin, and that helps a lot since several languages such as Italian, Spanish, English, French and German are derived from it. // Interesting topic...thank you for bringing it up! Regards // paul
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/15/2015 4:35:00 PM
Paul thank you for getting back to me on what I asked. You probably speak Italian also. You look American or English and your writing in English is impeccable. Maltese must be a special language I've never heard it. I wonder if it is close to another language. For example there are many dialects of Spanish. I took three years of french and speak fluent Spanish. Sometimes I can pick up the meaning of the french word because it resembles a Spanish word. Tres Bien Very well in french. Ta Bien is the same meaning in Spanish. So I wonder in the Maltese Language if it has a similarity to another Language. Different Languages are so fascinating to me. I wish I knew more of them. Thanks for your response my friend.
Date: 10/14/2015 4:51:00 PM
Dear Michael I agree with Paul on this one, a clever story and narrative, well expressed and written, and I do believe in angels with my whole heart and being, the good angels and the bad, thank you for all your comments two I really do read them sorry it took so long to get get to you, I had to work over at work, cheri
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Date: 10/14/2015 5:16:00 PM
Hi Cheri I have been busy myself. I cook for my wife and try to help her with everything around the house. While maintaining a full time job. I appreciate your visits Cheri.
Date: 10/14/2015 4:33:00 PM
A compelling narrative, Michael. For those who believe in angels this is comforting. I do! // paul
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/14/2015 5:11:00 PM
Paul it is comforting. I was going through the Poets list and noticed you were from Malta. Were you born there? I found it interesting. Is English your first or second language. Your English writing is on a PHD level. Thank you Paul your comments are valued to me. Stay well my friend.
Date: 10/14/2015 7:36:00 AM
What a story Michael! Fantastic.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/14/2015 4:56:00 PM
Richard look above for response. I hit the wrong reply lol.
Date: 10/14/2015 4:23:00 AM
An exceptional narration of a true story! If you ask me "Do you believe in angels?" My answer will be "What do you mean, believe? I know they exist!" We do not observe them but they are always around us, day and night, that is why I do not worry for they are going to do the best that they are allowed to! A seven, dear friend, Michael!
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/14/2015 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. I believe too my friend. They are around us. Sometimes I look around and talk to them. They must smile when they see me doing this. Someday Demetrios we will meet them. I want to thank them for all the years they watched over me. Stay well my friend.
Date: 10/14/2015 4:06:00 AM
weeee this write gave me goosebumps... but like Tim, Michael I believe in angels.. =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/14/2015 4:55:00 PM
Thanks Olive for your honest observation. Story I rewrote from what I had read years ago.
Date: 10/13/2015 10:29:00 PM
What an eerie story Michael. I do believe .
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/13/2015 11:31:00 PM
It was a story I heard about a while back. I put it in my own words. If you go on youtube Tim and search angels you wont believe all the pictures and films of them. I believe in them.

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