Dizzy the Banjo Man

He goes by the name of Dizzy, for he is a dancing dervish
               On the banjo his fingertips always pick’n a lively tune
          His mama was from Dixie and his papa was a busking man
               They lived a simple life sharing music on the streets
                    Or playing the lowland bars on a rowdy Thursday night

                    Now Dizzy is bent and even a bit stooped, all grizzled with grey
               A slow shuffling man whose hard luck never got him down
          Every Friday noon you’ll find him sitt’n with the AA folks
               Following along and do’n the steps, his banjo playing a song
                   Then he heads off downtown to his favorite corner spot

                    Dizzy remembers his papa preforming here not many years ago
               As his fingers tingle to feel the vibrations on the strings
          He releases the notes of the banjo’s twang and his little jig step
               He bows to the memory of his mama, blowing her a little kiss
                    He’s the last of his family and his name is Dizzy Danny Dubois

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/11/2019 6:17:00 PM
This was thoroughly an interesting morning read--Thanks for entertaining Dizzy into my life!
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Date: 9/8/2019 1:05:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest and brining Dizzy to life.
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Date: 9/7/2019 3:00:00 PM
Sooo where did you get the last name Dubois? It's my grandma's maiden name and Francis Dubois helped found Detroit. He is my grandma's great, great, great grandpa so very long ago. He was a French settler. So when I read this it caught my eye like no other! Also, really enjoyed how you brought Dizzy to life. Great poem congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 9/7/2019 6:45:00 PM
Wow LuLoo...it's not from my family at all! It was a favorite teacher of mine from 5th grade and I always thought it exotic back then...I wanted a D starting last name and it just popped up in my brain. Glad you enjoyed the read.
Date: 8/17/2019 8:46:00 AM
oh wow...very creative write bringing him to life...i could see him there, banjo in hand, this is wonderfully penned my friend...best wishes in the contest! hugs :)
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Date: 8/16/2019 4:34:00 PM
You have filled in the colors for Dizzy so well, I can hear his banjo and see his jig step, great job, Jeanne!
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Date: 8/15/2019 4:34:00 AM
Great story and description of Dizzy. And I love banjos or any street musicians Good job, Susan Panagiota
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