Divorce

Written: November 20, 2023 _______________________________________________ Divorce is rarely a triumph, falling apart as a curse. Indulging stable tension with your child referees. Venture a long divorce, privacy in public courts. Ostensible sets and claims, serve to widen the gap. Relationship ending in bitter is such a sad event. Children's hearts are broken forever, Essay to gather pieces, start over, your kids in pain.

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/21/2023 3:30:00 PM

This is a perfect poem about such a sad, sad topic Sotto. Well done my friend!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 11/21/2023 3:00:00 PM

Do you know Sotto?, I must make this poem my Fav. I've never been able to write acrostic poetry at the moment, but it doesn't matter the type of poetry, what it really matters in the end is the meaning, and I loved this huge piece of words that describe so well what is a divorce. I can't tell you what line is the best, because all are stunning. "Essay to gather pieces, start over, your kids in pain" perhaps that part is the most painful, but all parts of a divorce leave us as different people, something heavy to carry on our back. Hugs Sotto You wrote another one to be remberedxxx

Bill Baker

Date: 11/21/2023 2:38:00 PM

A wide variety of topics covered in your fine Acrostic poem, my friend. I want to congratulate you for the three poems just published in Poetry Soup's latest edition of their Anthologies! YEAH !!! Happy Thanksgiving to you and those you care most about. Bill

Silent One

Date: 11/21/2023 1:18:00 PM

I don't think people really understand the impact of divorce, i applaud those who stay for the sake of their children, but that still can cause problems and so many suffer from it.. your acrostic reads really well and you have covered a lot of aspects of divorce in it... childrens hearts are broken forever.. so very true my friend..

Jay Narain

Date: 11/21/2023 11:17:00 AM

Strong acrostic on divorce. Almost too realistic to be true.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/21/2023 5:24:00 AM

Forlorn as the theme of divorce. Wonderfully conveyed with deep feelings, my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/21/2023 3:23:00 AM

dearest Sotto--your Acrostic flows so well and it depicts divorce and its long-reaching aftermath. My stepchildren are certainly evidence of what happens when children are involved. They're grown adults now with children of their own. The wounds prevail, sometimes in large ways and sometimes in small ways. Well done, sir! Best wishes with the contest! Have a splendid day, your poetess friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/21/2023 12:39:00 AM

So well written about divorce dear Sotto, you’ve said it all. Divorce doesnt just affect individuals married but also affects negatively and strongly on children involved , hanging in the middle of it all, your acrostic flows very well and conveys so much. I especially loved the line “ Venture a long divorce, privacy in public courts“ deep and profound. But sometimes divorce also is the best choice for kids, and all involved when relationships can be toxic. Pleasure always reading you, BOL

Valsa George

Date: 11/20/2023 9:40:00 PM

More than the loneliness and frustration that befall the separated pair, what makes a divorce sad is the uncertainty and agony experienced by their children. The consequence of divorce is powerfully conveyed in this beautiful acrostic ! Have a happy week dear friend.

Karen Jones

Date: 11/20/2023 5:39:00 PM

I feel the angst in this fine acrostic. Oh how hearts break during divorce.