Division Of Neighbor

‘Hey stomach,’ says anus,
‘Would you cut the crap.’
“It’s not me,’ stomach says;
‘I won’t take the wrap.

It’s what they’re eating,
So blame teeth and mouth.
I’m innocent,’ says stomach,
‘For that filth down south.’

Brain has a good laugh
At organ expenses,
By prodding infighting
Over false offenses.

‘Are you kidding me,
You two dumb kidneys.
Always a teamed pair
For a fight that’s not fair!’

Roared livid liver
Who was hardly pleased,
That they blamed him
For the smelly feces.

‘Oh stop it now, liver
Just sit there and filter.
We said no such thing;
Don’t get out of kilter.’

‘Tee-he-he,’ laughs brain.
My plan’s working well,
To keep each organ
At odds over a smell,

That they have no power
To change or repair,
And since they can’t think
They’ll stay unaware.’

Hands and mouth kept
Eating junk by the hour.
Having been brainwashed,
They blindly devour.

Long ago brain trained eyes
To focus on the news,
Now it was time for all
Parts, to pay ‘their’ dues.

Bones pipe up, and say,
‘Something doesn’t feel right,
Hey muscles loosen up;
Why do you squeeze so tight?’

Muscles answer and say,
‘Colon and intestines
Are the guilty squeezers,
Causing congestion.

I’m just doing my part
At the request of the brain.’
‘But muscles,’ says bones,
‘It’s causing me pain.’

And after a while
Brain has all body parts,
At odds with themselves;
Over endless bad farts.

Organs, blood, and guts
Could not get along;
They once did their jobs
Keeping the body strong.

But brain has the answer,
‘Let’s vote on what to do.
Either I run the show,
Or you deal with bad poo!’

Yes, brain got them quibbling
And each held a grudge.
All based on false info
That made brain, ‘King Judge’.

So each part gave in
To that sneaky design,
And waited for orders
From brain to assign.

But brain was a liar
And steered organs wrong.
The body collapsed;
It didn’t take long.

Just like brain, most statesmen,
Fool us like we’re tarts.
Let’s not die for their lies,
But stay whole, not apart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 5:46 AM
What a great, funny and insightful poem! Congratulations on POTD! I laughed!
Beaufort Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 9:46 AM
David, I love how you weave this together into a timely message for our time. There is indeed a lot of blame being directed and not for the benefit of all of us, but rather to manipulate the public at large. The funny part is that many are eating it all right up without thinking about the long-term health of society. I am very skeptical of MAGA, since my own concern would be for what benefits the entire world since we're part of that body.
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:50 PM
Thanks for your thoughts on these things. It's also interesting that we're on this planet for a limited time, but at the same time with all other people alive. And then poof, we're all gone; it's like one very, very large class.
Kalita Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:35 AM
Many congratulations on the POTD. A wise ironical pen. Have a blessed day ahead
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:45 PM
Thanks Silpika for your kind words.
Parker Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 6:52 PM
PooTD congrats. Method in the madness. Clever...:o)
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:45 PM
That's a good one, Arlo, and thanks much!
Turner Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations David on POTD honors. Life without a heart would probably be pretty smelly. LOL A humorous tale with a message.
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:42 PM
Thanks Daniel, and yes, the heart has the last say.
Fowler Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 10:58 AM
ROTFL David. Clever - Bravo! Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:40 PM
Thanks so much Linda and am glad to hear you're rolling!
Romios Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 10:53 AM
Hilarious and creative… dear David. Your ability to step out into ways we do not normally think is so greatly appreciated. Hugs, Pangie xx
Romios Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:01 PM
Sometimess outright stupidity gets me going, ))) Sometimesi it is plain horribly written verse.9r… music inspires me. Arrogance of piets remnds me to stop thinkiing piers are not philospher kings, poetry is to be about beauty, but I get bored with that idea fast, I am always in state of flux.LOL Pangie xx
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:39 PM
Thanks so much Pangie for your thoughts. It's interesting that our creative variety is as varied as people's politics, philosophy, desires, etc. But sometimes hearing other's variations(not creative ones) sometimes hit us in the gut a little, if that makes sense.
Baker Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Back to congratulate you on your fine POTD, David! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A creative/fun write with a great ending. Have a blessed day writing away.............................
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:35 PM
Thanks so much Paula, and I'm glad you liked the ending which I waivered on including or not.
Doll Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 7:17 AM
David, a very unique and original poem. Congratulations on POTD ~ Warren
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:34 PM
Thanks so much Warren, I appreciate you reading this.
May Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Lol, I enjoyed this fun write, Congrats on POTD
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Thanks so much Joseph. It's fun to get one once in a while!
Sands Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 5:51 AM
Great one David. True, let's stay whole not apart. Not let them divide us. Congratulations on this creative humorous POTD :)
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:31 PM
So true on staying together! Thanks for the kind words.
Rodgers Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Hello, David, I love how your poem offers a witty and thought-provoking perspective on the intricate dynamics within the human body, cleverly paralleling it with societal divisions and manipulation through the metaphorical interplay between organs and the brain. I enjoyed your highlights on how misinformation and manipulation can sow discord and lead to downfall, whether within the body or in broader contexts like politics. Your humor adds a layer of accessibility to its more profound message, to question authority and unity in the face of deceitful agendas. David, what a potent reminder to stay vigilant and unified against forces that seek to divide us. Bravo, David, for crafting such a compelling piece deserving of recognition as POTD. - Blessings, Daniel
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Daniel for all your kind words and insight. Those were exactly my thoughts and thanks for noticing this.
Kaufman Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:27 AM
Hi David, Congratulations on this amusing POTD with a political punch in the last stanza. I first thought you and Jan were doing a collaboration..Lol It's well done and most deserving of recognition. Cheers
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:36 PM
Thanks so much, Nancy. Yes I could see a collaboration here...flush it out a little.
Kitchin Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 3:56 AM
David, a fun poem, love the humor, congratulations on POTD.
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:34 PM
Thanks Tania for your kind words!
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 3:54 AM
Love the humour David, congratulations to to you on today's POTD honour, congratulations. Tom
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Thanks so much, Tom!
Lane Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 3:17 AM
If the heart had stopped beating for a few ticks it would’ve shown them who was really in charge. Congrats on your potd, David.
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Good point Lin. I wonder if subconsciously I didn't want the brain to have a competent foe; who knows.
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 3:12 AM
- Congratulations on your fun p.o.t.d., David :) - hugs
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:30 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
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March 18, 2024 at 2:25 AM
Back to say congratulations on you receiving poem of the day… Beryl
Meadows Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 1:30 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:27 PM
Thanks so much, Jeanette!
Greenhough Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 1:28 AM
Congratulations on your POTD.
Jones Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 12:35 AM
Hahaha loved this witty tale with a political twist! Congratulations on a unique and entertaining potd!
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Thanks for reading and favorably commenting on my poem, Karen.
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Haha. Comparing brain to head to state. It's the reason countries are going down the toilet.
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:25 PM
That's such a fitting line, Andrea, and thanks for adding it as a poem PS.
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 9:25 PM
This one is great. I'm going to keep it. I think the nose should have spoke up too. Thanks for the humor.
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:23 PM
Thanks Hilda, and great point about the nose.
Baker Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 9:01 PM
A FAV for my list David. Should be a POTD! Excellent creativity, my friend. You have a good handle on the anatomy and physiology of the human body. Thanks for the fun read and biology lesson all in one fine poem. Awesome poetry! Have a pleasant evening! Bill
Fisher Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Thanks Bill for such a favorable review of this poem. I don't think our brains could get away with what was done in the poem, lol.
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