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Prizing self entails being true to who you are. There are flaws and candles that ignite the air. Man must determine his trifles and vision. to be known for his victory, not his omission. Everything vibrates and breathes with vitality. "Life is the mind dwelling in a false reality." Nothing can prevent fiery existence spread.   Life creates a graveyard amid careless dead. Ponder the angel's conception of the woods. Only a keeper knows where ring-dove broods.  Glad chirp feels cute; finds the angel happy. Success is alike heaven; our steps are snappy. In search of that mysterious, all-curing elixir. Life is fleeting and puzzling; forewarn the mixer. It is a force of its own that does not move time. Hinting at and fathoming Divinity, life is sublime. I revere you with a modest and cheerful smile. Across words, I'll praise you with gaze for a while. Fruitful awareness sees but can't touch the trees. I worship you as a beauty that flows and foresees.
1st place contest winner Written: February 06, 2023 Writing Challenge - D Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/21/2023 2:11:00 PM
Sotto, excellent writing an congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - D Forms, well done, I like the image and the music, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/12/2023 7:39:00 PM
Being true to who we are.... is a great principle. Life is fleeting. A divine search gives meaning to life. Great penning, dear friend. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 2/11/2023 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2023 11:52:00 AM
You have done an outstanding job with the chosen theme Lasaad. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/11/2023 10:44:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Lasaad! "Man must determine his trifle and vision, to be known for his victory, not his omission." There are so many beautiful and strong lines, and your poem flows so beautifully. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/11/2023 7:11:00 AM
- Back with congratulations, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 2/6/2023 3:12:00 PM
Gorgeous writing as always, Lasaad:-) This seems like a sure fire winner to me!
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Date: 2/6/2023 2:49:00 PM
Angelic feelings throughout my friend. Your words resonate in realm of divinity. Endearing write, Lasaad. Best to you.
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Date: 2/6/2023 2:42:00 PM
A beautifully detailed poem of divinity Sotto. Best wishes… Belle
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Date: 2/6/2023 12:18:00 PM
A wonderful exposition of Divinity. So well argued. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/6/2023 10:21:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Las ... "Only a keeper knows where ring-dove broods" ... - Best wishes in the contest - hugs
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