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Diving In

where the heart leads
adventures follow
daring hearts
geared up to go
enthusiasm soaring

anticipating the challenge
forging ahead with confidence
thriving on the lust for conquest
lay groundwork for elation
swooping in wholeheartedly

eager to launch each escapade
lunge and pounce with conviction
high on the taste of freedom
riding the waves of time

deriving satisfaction
biting into life
measure man against himself
alone in the universe

master of his destiny
owning his achievements
implode with passion
       


Published in my 24-page photo book ~DIVING IN~ 2019

Read on air by invitation  ~  August 25, 2020  'LATE NIGHT POETS'

AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Brewer Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 4:21 AM
What a rich, rollicking listing of wise observations, driving along with high energy! I don’t generally follow free verse but this one has me hooked. Well done, Line
Gauthier Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment, Geoffrey.
La France Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:58 AM
Line, your poem is full of poetic energy, well done !
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. Most appreciated.
Adams Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:26 AM
this one makes the reader dive right in and float along easily through your words...brilliant penning my friend, love it :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Mathis Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 2:09 AM
Wow! I love the energy of this work. Wonderful write!!
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 11:31 PM
Packs a passionate punch...
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:15 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 10:51 PM
So much enthusiasm; this is vivid and moving steadily toward a win in every contest, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:15 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Caren.
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 10:21 PM
This sure doesn't sound like the work of someone who is 'counting the sands of time!' Ha, ha: This brave, daring write shows your true colors, Line. Bravo! Go for it! Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:15 AM
Thanks, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
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