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For Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title, Vol 47 Poetry Contest/ Dec. 4, 2024

Bright and nearly obsidian were his eyes whose incredible warmth drank me in. He touched my face (his gaze unwavering) as exquisitely he began to paint my sweetest sin. The esctasy inside me was building. It was like no other feeling that I knew. Sable were his lovely silken locks of hair, which with unbridled pleasure I ran my fingers through. His eyelashes brushed lightly against mine. How beautiful and long those lashes were. My stomach was a storm of butterflies. Oh, what sensations in me that young man could stir! The simmering of his lust I reveled in when at last, his luscious mouth met mine. I was seething too beneath my skin, and passion-parched was I with madness divine. I drank him in like absinthe. Inhibitions fled. Every particle inside me was filled with heat. My body quaked, but how I relished the ache. My deepest desire had never seemed so sweet. Like a twilight’s crimson and persimmon, we melded into one. In a sizzling frenzy we became immersed. Scintillating stars appeared. All else disappeared. We traveled to another galaxy where the stars all burst. Oh, the wonder of madness that can be divine. Crazy love it was (were it real love at all). I climbed passion’s highest peak, and then I let myself be engulfed in the froth of its plunging waterfall.

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Date: 12/13/2024 4:22:00 AM
"The ecstasy inside me was building. It was like no other feeling that I knew." Dear Andrea, a sure sign of 'divine' madness. What bubbly feelings of hot romance all through the poem! Greatly enjoyed. Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 12/12/2024 2:30:00 AM
"Oh, the wonder of madness that can be divine" - another grand writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/11/2024 4:00:00 PM
Andrea, heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent romantic write! Amazing imagery!
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on another contest win you certainly have a gift. xx
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Date: 12/7/2024 1:50:00 PM
Are you sure this isn't the making-love contest? Well it should be. Hot miss Andrea, a younger man CrAzy. Break out the bubbly and tell more mi amore!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/8/2024 8:32:00 AM
And the one sponsor who only chooses 5 winners, lazy I guess lol.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 3:45:00 PM
yes, I am sure. I gave an old poem called Passion's Color for that other contest. I don't win with that particular judge, so I am not making an effort.
Date: 12/7/2024 11:57:00 AM
Tut tut tut Andrea..' I do hope this was posted After 10.' Well I never..! LOL)))
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 1:03:00 PM
Hahaha
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/7/2024 11:58:00 AM
Well maybe i did.??
Date: 12/5/2024 1:21:00 PM
- For some it may sound crazy but when stars appeared it becomes romantic and beautiful, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 1:03:00 PM
That's amore.
Date: 12/5/2024 1:19:00 PM
Oh mi gawsh! My soul aunt, what did I just read from you haha. Im covering my eyes (haha) this is so soo good and you do any genre so well! I felt like i was reading daniel steel, or should i say sidney sheldon? So good! You should do more romance , i especially loved “ I drank him in like absinthe. Inhibitions fled. Every particle inside me was filled with heat.” Soooo intense! Such love must be celebrated! I loved this! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/5/2024 1:24:00 PM
thanks so much. I had a lot of fun with this one.Was waiting to see what you would think. Soupmail for ya.
Date: 12/5/2024 9:00:00 AM
Andrea, love your romantic sight! Hugs ~ Kim
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 1:04:00 PM
Thanks, Kim
Date: 12/4/2024 10:36:00 PM
beautifully written sure it is love, passionate one, enjoyed all images and verses, thanks poet
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 1:04:00 PM
Thanks, Ysnn
Date: 12/4/2024 6:40:00 PM
Wow, you wrote this beautifully. I love how you viewed love as madness.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2024 1:05:00 PM
Thanks dear. What other madness would I write about,?
Date: 12/4/2024 5:42:00 PM
An engrossing tale, with beautifully imagined, romantic images. Thank you for sharing, Andrea. :)
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Date: 12/4/2024 11:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write... Have a fun day writing Away............
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