Divine Light

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divine light bursts we see first hand our thirst thus ends 14-April-2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2021 2:05:00 PM

what a fantastic rendering in this form!!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/14/2021 6:45:00 PM

this compressed form with syllable rule is challenging, no doubt!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/14/2021 8:50:00 AM

The enlightening and evergreen beauty of your poem is inspiring and humbling. A gem of gentle spirit. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/14/2021 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Susan!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/14/2021 3:21:00 AM

When we are able to see first hand, we come to realize dear Seeker that this earth is very small compared to the mysterious world of ladder, may we do our best in this lifetime to prepare for it, no matter how old we are, we need to be ready, Much love, take care :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/14/2021 3:27:00 AM

Yes, true words! Childlike innocence and purity of heart is all the ‘preparation’ needed!