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Image result for a fall leaf pressed in a book

Note: Afflatus - a writer's inspiration, unique to them coming from, for example, their MUSE.

Divine Afflatus


Leaves of Autumn, burnt orange, yellow, red,
      gold, strewn on the ground decaying,
         caressed by wild breezes,
           rusty colors wilting,
              crumbling,
              dying.
              I love the smell,
           the veins and patterns,
        and gathering many to my heart,
I preserve them and press them in my books.

------------ September 28, 2016 -------------

Verse

Submitted to the contest, Old or New, 10 Lines
sponsor, Rick Parise

Fourth Place

(afflatus means poetic inspiration)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 4:30 PM
In only ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara
Grasso Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 3:44 AM
Lovely, Broken Wings! Congratulations! ...Fran
Scars Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 2:33 AM
VERY creative and lovely Broken Wings...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Garcia Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 6:51 PM
I see now what you mean when you encourage creative formatting - when done perfectly as you've done here it done makes it a spectacular overall body of work. Certainly something to emulate that might even serve as affatus(?) A high 7 for sure
Daniel Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 3:56 AM
Very beautiful, Constance:) I can feel the leaves:)
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Absolutely beautiful Constance - I made leaf patterns as a child but have never pressed leaves:-) hugs Jan xx
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