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DISUNITY THEN UNITY

DISUNITY THEN UNITY Last Episode of Pure Fantasy. Fireball always seems to take center stage, Except in the last episode it was with absolute rage, Echoman has secretly loved this ravishing beauty Lost her to a human whilst she was on duty! There were good and bad super heroes Throughout my story, Who realized and expressed the power and glory Of good over evil, Between the ones to be trusted over a dirty mean weasel. Scorpion Sting, Midnight Raven, and Guiltless Real Bad boys with murderous intentions, Whilst Galactic Warrior, Celestial Calm, and Tidal wave were The good guys who didn’t wish to continue vengeance. Our Bad boys come from Plant Jupiter and on their Return through to their planet traveled our solar system, And Visited Planets Mercury Uranus and Saturn, Incredible numbers of soldiers were chosen, Soldiers ready to fight to the end, this could not be disputed Whilst Echoman recruited Warriors loyal, and just, perfectly suited To fight fairly, from Neptune Venus and Mars, Soldiers reputed who knew the rules of Intergalactic laws, These planets were guarded at portals with fearless Robots of incredible vigor! Returning with his spaceship carefully piloting And avoiding satellites in orbit, And stars that were dying Meteors of all sizes flying Echoman felt sad, this whole war had become sordid!! However, I have a secret which Is now to be disclosed, three colonels led our Superheroes one beautiful blonde and two Handsome men, they were going to do well In leading their warriors away from certain death And the devil’s hell, Sunshine Smile, Silent one and Wingster, They had to prepare to retaliate immediately Hundreds of space ships already Firing, and Diving, A formidable sight , This was going to be a fearful battle and fight! Our three colonels Sunshine Smile Silent One and Wingster Rocketed past the clouds and our sky, Reaching space, At an incredible pace, Both armies fought with unbelievable superhuman power They fired unending lasers and rockets, Space ships fell from the skies in flames Thousands had died Spaceships smashed to the ground, soldiers fried. Echoman could take this no more, suddenly disaster, may day may day, May day May day, Silent One radioed in, Sunshine Smile has been hit, She is critical, both colonels with remotes Helped her land safely on Planet Earth, Doctors rallied around, caring for the VIP They were aware of her rank and worth And her intergalactic reputation. The King of Saturn and Echoman urgently Began their communication, Both agreed this bloodshed was useless, They were destroying their galaxy , It would become just a memory a fantasy! The bad superheroes were ordered to lay Down their arms too many had died Whilst Echoman told his soldiers to stop Too many widows had already cried! There would be no universe, no galaxy to be united! Sunshine Smile recovered and all three colonels Were to be knighted, Wingster returned to marry his beauty from Venus, Whilst Silent one and Sunshine Smile, the two Colonels each an absolute genius Returned to their families safe and sound Upon their home ground. Wingster’s wedding was a sparkling intergalactic bling An absolute thrill and fling! The 8 planets including Earth, held a universal forum Where a treaty and coalition between them all Including Earth, was signed, hopefully all planets would Become allies, stand proud and tall, And tell their children one day of a hateful War, That almost witnessed a galactic death and fall.

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Date: 4/4/2020 7:01:00 PM
WOW Jennifer, this is such a wonderful write from a truly golden pen. This was a journey that I would not have missed. I do love the content of this write and your imagination sings. You draw us into the heart of your fantasy. This has to be a fav, Jennifer. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 4/7/2020 3:02:00 AM
Thank you Mike, a wonderful comment and suso thoughtful - so glad you enjoyed it and honored that you have made it a fav. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 3/11/2020 12:21:00 PM
So glad Sunshine Smile recovered :) Nice tribute to some of our poetry soup soldiers - I like how your word choices made this feel urgent and fast moving - well done, my friend!
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Date: 3/18/2020 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Michelle, I asked the three concerned if they would mind , their poetry soup names blended in so well with my story and they eventually they saved the day for our galaxy. Thank you my friend for your lovely comments always. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 3/4/2020 12:55:00 PM
Yours is science fiction at its best, Jenny! Delightful narrative which holds our attention from beginning to end...and your imagination is truly fertile. It was heartening to see Soup collaborating in having hostilities cease. ~ Warm regards & hugs //paul
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Date: 3/4/2020 1:11:00 PM
Oh what a lovely comment Paul, yes they were all colonels and helped to save Planet Earth and our galaxy, true super heroes! Thank-you my good friend. Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.
Date: 3/1/2020 6:40:00 PM
I love how you worked in the poets on the soup, as colonels in this great space saga. Enjoyed.
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Date: 3/3/2020 1:58:00 PM
I first asked them if they would mind and then I made them colonels and they saved the day and our galaxy. Blessings and thank-you my friend, I had missed seeing your comments. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/29/2020 3:34:00 PM
Quite an amazing piece Jenny, great imagery and superlative rhyme too. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon
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Date: 3/3/2020 1:44:00 PM
Thank-you Gordon, that was my last episode , maybe I'll start another series about another topic completely. Glad you enjoyed Gordon, How is your weather, is the cold breaking a little? Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/28/2020 10:40:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … it amazes me how you and others can take your imagination into such a universe of fantasy. I can't seem to leave our planet earth - very interesting set of verses Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 2/29/2020 5:55:00 AM
Hi Lindsay, Space and super heroes my son was crazy about and as I was a single mom for 13 years of my life before Elias and I got married 2o years ago, became infected with his enthusiasm as well as a keen fan of football as he has always been and still is. Thank you Lindsay for a great comment. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/27/2020 4:24:00 PM
As per your usual, you took me on a rocking adventure I'll not soon forget. I have missed your writes because I didn't get on Soup most of Dec. and all of Jan. My Mom went to visit her brother 1,000 of miles away, then called to say she was staying - would I pack up of house. You can imagine. Good to be reading you again, you upbeat, fun and original writer you! Love ... CayCay
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Date: 2/29/2020 6:01:00 AM
Hi my darling friend, I did answer a few of your poems and have missed so ver much also. I was thrilled to see you comments which are always so kind and encouraging, because I find you t o be one of the most original and amazing poets on soup. What a job you had clearing up all your mom's things to send her, I can only imagine how hectically busy you must have been. Hugs and love Cay Cay, Jenny.
Date: 2/27/2020 12:24:00 PM
I like the idea of super heroes...including the trio from Poetry Super Soupers...
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Date: 2/29/2020 6:08:00 AM
Thank-you Arturo, their names suited my story, but I got their permission first. They saved the Day! A great comment, Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/25/2020 7:38:00 PM
WoW!! I am mind blown...from your expanding mind in this genre...you are a superhero to me, Jennster...sorry for the late reply, have been suffering from a flu-like virus...a fav from me too my beautiful friend...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 2/27/2020 9:42:00 AM
Hi Wingster , careful with your flu Virus, too many bugs around the world right now. Do you have an annual flu in jection in Winter? Elias and I always do not that it always helps but perhaps we would get sicker if we didn't have it. I did make a big deal of your wedding and said that your wedding was a galactic bling, but the poem went into 4 and a half pages and you did invite everyone. Couldn't add everything, maybe the wedding will be a poem all on its own! Look out for it! Blessings my dear friend. Jennifer.
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Date: 2/25/2020 7:41:00 PM
I hope I invited you and everyone else at the wedding lol :o)
Date: 2/25/2020 3:01:00 AM
I agree with Tom, you chose your saviors really well! Great storytelling, I am glad i could save the day! The thing with such things is that the battle may be won this time, but the war could continue... Fave for me!
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Date: 2/27/2020 9:34:00 AM
Hi Silent One, you are a brave Superhero and the three of you played a huge role in this story. You and Wingster saved Sunshine Smile and who knows one day in five hundred years from now it could be a united inter-galactic cosmopolitan situation. We will all see it from high above! Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/24/2020 8:15:00 PM
love your fantasy writes... they are always intriguing to me... love the happy ending of our three poetic hero friends... wonderful write Jennifer :) hugs and blessings :)
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:38:00 PM
Hi Sandy, Glad you enjoyed our superheroes in action, they were fabulous and fearless, and really deserve to be knighted. Blessings, Jenny.
Date: 2/24/2020 3:47:00 PM
Power of your imagination shines my friend--another fantasy tale captivates--unity wins in the end.
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:30:00 PM
I have this fascination, not for during our lifetimes, but in many years to come, intergalactic travel will be the order of the day, imagine the excitement of travelling to Venus for a Holiday Great comment thank you Vijay. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/24/2020 3:03:00 PM
Enjoyed the journey into space and no better choice than, S. O, wingster and sunshine. Well written Jennifer, you are a good storytellar. Hope you're well. Tom
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:27:00 PM
Hi Tom, yes we are settling down thank you. Three brave warriors and dedicated to their professions. Glad you enjoyed, thank you Tom! Blessings, Jennifer
Date: 2/24/2020 2:45:00 PM
You have a way of creating such an exciting sci-fi story told in verse. There are many who believe Earth has been visited by aliens, but you raise the potential for universal peace. Fabulous, Jennifer!! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:22:00 PM
Wouldn't it be great Carolyn, if all the planets weren inhabited - inter galactic travel would be the order of the day then. Blessings, my dear friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/24/2020 12:38:00 PM
Quite the hero's, those three, in more ways than one. Enjoyed the voyage Jennifer, thank you...
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:18:00 PM
Hi Charlie, lovely to have you visit and comment. Glad you enjoyed the voyage - absolutely, great superheroes who are going to be knighted. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/24/2020 11:43:00 AM
- An awesome story, dear Jenny :) - Sunshine Smile, Silent one and Wingster are all a bit tired now ... (although Wingster is a little foolishly in love :))) ... they need some rest after this fierce fight. ..but, they are proud of what they did ... - Love it ... an amazing and exciting story, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:13:00 PM
Earth is proud of you Colonel Sunshine Smile, fought with all your strength and might, and you are going to be knighted - way to go my beautiful blond warrior!. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.