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Distended Lips

. In her arms I collapse from sweat and pangs of the early heat az hern distended lips drip And of the once I thought sylph which to my rescue would never come she came

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/5/2011 12:13:00 AM

Great peace James...luv it...thanks so much for sharing....smiles....chiquita

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 9:55:00 PM

Ty, and another belated ty hon....much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2011 7:00:00 AM

It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us James. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 6/20/2011 11:06:00 AM

If I read this - forgive me - I don't remember it. Anywho. Love this one. Congratulations. YOu must have worked very hard. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2011 1:09:00 PM

winkers back at ya James.. romantically creative with visual vibrancy my friend and partner.. oh.. perfect lips sounds like to me to refresh u from the heat.. oh..

Insatiable Piyush

Date: 6/1/2011 4:20:00 AM

The best part...she came...luv u for that...grt poem..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/31/2011 6:33:00 PM

Dripping with romance for sure! She rescued you indeed! Did u want to borrow my bike? ha ha. Glad you liked my eco friendly write!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 5/31/2011 2:18:00 AM

The sylph will always go to her lover..beautiful,sentimental is the word!

Red Fiery

Date: 5/30/2011 5:39:00 PM

omg ! Superb . Truly romantic write . 7/7 for sure !

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2011 3:49:00 AM

rawwwr! reaching new heights, here, james!!could you critique my monopoly piece?? it's a rather different one... love this piece! :) hugggs,nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/29/2011 12:20:00 PM

Woo wee, I need to go stand outside in the rain hehe, jk James, love this!!! love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2011 8:45:00 AM

James, the love and falling are extremely like a romantic book... they way one wants to be wanted after not thinking it will ever happen again.. boom!! A passion of heat to die for... enjoyed...p.d.

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 9:51:00 PM

You were only supposed to be tickled by my writes hon, not understand them...banter banter miss you see you later...much love 10yearz later...lol, james

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 5/29/2011 4:25:00 AM

beautiful... so romantic

James Foulk

Date: 5/28/2011 10:36:00 AM

a great piece, really enjoyed reading this most creative piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on Dear Sister.