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Distant Shores

the road travelled like a momentous mountain, the end game on its peak of distant shores. a matrix of bubblegum ready to drop with coins or a complex crazy quilt with lazy and diligent dyes. a wheatfield that traverses the plains and hushes introspection in its youth and snatches heads in its short short time left on earth, breaking bread. the fruit like vines hang onto the wrinkled cliffs. a small boat in the waxing ocean waves, alone at last, neither lauded nor drowned...what is is...salt on tongue, the port on the silvered horizon. An anchor and rope leans like a sailor approaching home with a resurrected smile. 6/17/2018

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Date: 6/24/2018 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this amazing distant shores poem. Your imagery is awesome.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2018 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 6/24/2018 3:22:00 PM
Amazing imagery in this poem, Kim. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 6/18/2018 6:19:00 PM
Beautifully said Kim...very poetic in its form...a winner is coming!...love & light...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thank you WW! :)
Date: 6/18/2018 10:20:00 AM
The images keeping the sailor's thought engaged have been brilliantly perceived and painted ... Lovely ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Probir!
Date: 6/18/2018 2:36:00 AM
Lovely verse Kim, must be the only thing on a sailor's mind after a long spell at sea. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2018 5:46:00 AM
For sure!

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