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Distant Lovers

My heart is literally breaking. Can you please cure this aching? I long for your gentle touch, I desire it and crave it so much. Why are you so distant my dear? I don't know how we ended up here. My love can you meet me half way? Loving all of you makes my day. I will not give up on us, just trust Fighting for our love is a must. 2-2-16

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Iromo Esther

Date: 11/30/2021 11:24:00 AM

I love the rhyme

Justin Worthy

Date: 6/29/2016 7:59:00 AM

A story I've lived..More than once unfortunately Good piece-JW

Funom Makama

Date: 2/11/2016 9:06:00 AM

A wonder and a bliss, your lines have given my heart a kiss and I am glad on your page, I did not suffer a miss. An outright 7 dear colleague

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/3/2016 6:49:00 PM

The fighting spirit of your heart's rhyming ache and resolution is really moving to me Alexis..."Fighting for our love is a must..." these questions, this passionate confusion and your cause for love's survival is thunderous to me....J.A.B.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/2/2016 7:51:00 AM

Wonderfully tender and sweet despite the aching! Love will prevail, dearest Alexis! A seven!