Distant Lights

Look! In the distance, I see them again. Bright and beautiful red bursts fill my eyes as blue cascades gently fall toward the earth and golden sprays twinkle like glitter in the sky. The colors thrill my skin with shivers and chills, and each loud burst I hear makes me jump with delight. Always, in the distance, I can see them. Her smile bursts forth from her crimson lips as her glistening tears fall from azure eyes and her flaxen hair sparkles around him. I see her quiver as she presses against him, and through her longing I can hear her deep sighs. Turning away from this tender moment my mind starts to wonder what's left of my life. The sadness that fills me with each passing minute leaves me aching with sorrow and wondering why such explosions of beauty I see only at a distance, as time slips by.
06/10/16

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Date: 6/22/2016 9:33:00 AM
What a beautifully sad write, at least one is not envious of others happiness in love, only wishes for the same, wonderful write, congrats on fine placement! A7
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James Inman
Date: 6/22/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thank you John.
Date: 6/19/2016 9:56:00 AM
James,,this is a beautiful poem, ,a big CONGRATULATIONS on your placement in the contest and I am loving this 7 ~
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James Inman
Date: 6/19/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thank you BW.
Date: 6/16/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
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Date: 6/15/2016 1:14:00 PM
I see this placed in a member contest! Stirring write! Love the way you compared her to the fireworks, very creative! Congratulations!
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James Inman
Date: 6/15/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Trudy.
Date: 6/14/2016 3:05:00 AM
I hope that proximity lights from the distance. I enjoy your theme, where the distance does leave room for the time not to slip by too much. Congratulations.
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James Inman
Date: 6/14/2016 7:33:00 AM
Thanks for your nice words.
Date: 6/13/2016 12:15:00 PM
Lovely! Congratulations, James!
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James Inman
Date: 6/14/2016 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 6/13/2016 12:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely nice friend drawn with beautiful colors. A great congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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James Inman
Date: 6/14/2016 7:30:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment BL.
Date: 6/13/2016 12:05:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem. You set yourself a difficult task, and it could still do with some editing to make it crisper, i.e. less wordy. However, you did well to come fifth and I congratulate you on your work for my contest. Julia, with my best wishes.
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James Inman
Date: 6/14/2016 7:29:00 AM
Julia, thank you so much for hosting this contest. I agree with your comment completely. After reading it several times it could do with a bit more editing. Thank you again.
Date: 6/13/2016 11:25:00 AM
James, congratulations to you for your wonderful placement on this very short list for the 'fireworks for me' Premiere Contest! Beautiful and very well done! 7 Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 6/13/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Sandra and I really enjoyed yours as well.
Date: 6/12/2016 10:30:00 PM
Distant melancholy memories....Good write...
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James Inman
Date: 6/13/2016 5:17:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Joseph.
Date: 6/11/2016 2:39:00 PM
- A beautiful poem written by little mournful thoughts, James - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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James Inman
Date: 6/11/2016 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 6/11/2016 12:44:00 AM
I, too, think your write beautiful, very deep and searching. It also fits the "Distant Things" contest, I think. A loved reading and being in your poem ... CayCay
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James Inman
Date: 6/11/2016 7:31:00 AM
...and I always love it when you visit CayCay. Thank you.
Date: 6/10/2016 7:17:00 PM
This is very beautiful, James. Your expressions were tender and matched well with the wonderful imagery... Good luck in the contest! I think this should do very well.
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James Inman
Date: 6/10/2016 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Kelly.
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