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Distant dreams of paradise

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alone i walk the lengths of this world you’ve been gone forever and a day you didn’t say you’d be gone an eternity when you last said your goodbyes i wander here alone in my wilderness while you’re out there on the other side i walk around chasing the light in a sky that clocks the time meanwhile i shed my tears of dew wondering when again i’ll be with you

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Date: 7/20/2025 4:47:00 PM
I'm misty eyed after reading your poem. Such depth and subtlety in your words, words that resonated with me.
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Date: 7/21/2025 5:07:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara ~ most appreciated

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