Distanced

on the edges of every dream you stood my salvation from pain wiping free my lonely tears your lambency shined like a beacon guiding me through darkness your wings comforted, shielded me a kiss blown on wishes adrift in the winds that held you closer i taste you on my lips as you part through my tears on the edges of dreams you stand distanced i reach for you as my hands slip through air this blade pierces my heart through the fog lifting me into my salvation from pain

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/31/2019 6:17:00 AM

I love the imagery at the end...hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 10:07:00 AM

Thank you so very much Kim...:) hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/31/2019 6:06:00 AM

Beautiful again... I love your writings. They are always enchanting and make me think of love - You have surely held so much love in your heart, God bless you, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 10:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina...my heart is a very giving heart and sometimes too much for my own good.... but God always keeps me under his wings... blessings to you my friend :) hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/30/2019 6:22:00 PM

Nice penning Sandy, very emotional and heartbreaking. Good penning! Poetry hugs,Gordon

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 7:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Gordon... hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/30/2019 2:46:00 PM

12 funerals in one year? I've been to quite a few, but most are in their 80's or 90's, although one was 48, the other 61. It does take it's toll on ones emotions, but you are handling it well

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 4:12:00 PM

Yeah two were the last of my mom’s siblings one was my dad’s last siblings and his oldest daughter. A cousin on my moms side my nieces step dad ( after she lost my brother her mom remarried but I had know him for years) a few of the kids friends that were like kids to me and some coworkers one I was very close with the youngest of them was 21 one was 28 one was 29 I write it out it helps Thanks John :) hugs

Silent One

Date: 10/30/2019 1:34:00 PM

There is no sadness like that if lost love ..Memories we never forget either ..

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 2:27:00 PM

So true my friend when the heart experiences loss it always is there ... hugs :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 12:40:00 PM

WOW! Sandra this was a perfect pen done with such feelings, well done my sweet friend!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 12:51:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend :). It came out of nowhere ... glad it came off so strong with emotion ... hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2019 12:17:00 PM

This shows a love for someone who is no longer around, but what great memories!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 12:42:00 PM

I am sure we all have lost a love or two in life. My first love died at 24 ... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/30/2019 12:11:00 PM

If I had more than one heart they would all be broken reading this sad and lonely feeling poem. Beautifully crafted sadness my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 12:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend ...smile it’s just poetry :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2019 11:38:00 AM

Superbly worded to convey the core of your message: i taste you on my lips as you part through my tears....on the edges of dreams you stand distanced. The ending aptly so very sad, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 11:42:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend...i had to clear all my old photos (thousands) off my computer because the drive is going...i didn't want to lose them, but came across so many of good times with people that are gone from life...i went to 12 funerals alone last year... my emotions have been everywhere lately...i try to write happy but the sadness peeks through... hugs