Distance

Her love quite deceitful in a grand theatric she performs an illusion of Passion... a key holds my heart safe in pain, bandaged and bruised of past broken remnants, I close, locked...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rick on your well deserved win in Catie's contest "Traditional Cinquain". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/17/2011 5:41:00 AM

Congraulations on the eighth place win in the contest, Rick

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/16/2011 8:57:00 PM

wonderful descriptive piece, congrats on your win in the contest

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/16/2011 2:33:00 PM

Rick, you put this one together nicely. Very deserving win, my friend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2011 1:32:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your big win in this contest luv.. another amazing write my friend.. enjoy another special win..

Kash Poet

Date: 4/16/2011 1:20:00 PM

Congrats ^Rick on your well deserved win in the contest---kashinath

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/15/2011 10:17:00 AM

A very creative write, beautiful finish using key and lock.Good luck in the contest Rick. Gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/14/2011 9:00:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today ^Rick. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find even more inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a great day. Love, Carol