Dispassion

sewn too tight, breakage;
it's all right. lasting faster,
inflicting disaster, salvage that self.
singularity resuscitated,
engulfs, laps up habit. 
havoc cavorts amongst the 
lords, constricts, maneuvers
through chords, sits betwixt
teeth & tongue. it is such, which,
among pauses in sight, will touch &
drip bits of light over wounds, to 
wash away intention.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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May 19, 2010 at 8:23 AM
The rhythm of this poem works to make your point. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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