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Dismal Dreams- Rhyme Time With 5

The threshold of my life is dark and bleak, Dismal dreams haunt me,peace is all I seek. Bloodstained covers are wrapped around me, My piteous life is nothing at all, so too speak I loathe my conception, darkness is all I see 1.) piteous 2.) bloodstained 3.) threshold 4.) conception 5.) dismal 10-1-17

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Date: 10/3/2017 2:15:00 PM
I feel the dark in this poem, Alexis. Excellent imagery and well-expressed emotional agony. This makes for an heart engaging poem to read. Splendid write, my friend. Love and hugs always.
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Date: 10/2/2017 12:26:00 PM
You did this very well Alexis..GL in the contest..
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Date: 10/2/2017 9:22:00 AM
Awesome write using the five words Alexis! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 10/1/2017 1:36:00 PM
You did this very well Alexis..
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Date: 10/1/2017 2:17:00 PM
Hi Silent, Thank you very much. I hope Laura thinks so too:-) Alexis

Book: Shattered Sighs