Dismal

dismal march rainstorm baby mice found in garage kids selecting names Submitted on March 29, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAR 31) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on June 3, 2018

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Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/4/2018 3:59:00 PM

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 8:25:00 PM

LOL - this garage was not attached to the house. That little detail might change the mood of the find - although kids wouldn't care.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/4/2018 2:13:00 PM

This is so specific - might it be a memory of a real event?

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 8:27:00 PM

Yes, actually. my sister was so taken with her find. I'm planning a little haibun book for my mom's upcoming birthday with memories...

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2018 6:23:00 AM

Yes! We found them in our garden shed. Unfortunately the chewed the wires on the riding lawn mower. Another great Haiku, Line. Elaine

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 10:45:00 AM

Not so cute when damage is found and the accused are undeniably guilty.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/3/2018 10:13:00 PM

Oh I love this haiku, Line! Something my sister and I would have done too.. A wonderful poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/3/2018 6:26:00 PM

Oh what a most clever haiku - just too cute - it made me smile! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2018 6:59:00 PM

Thanks, Pandita. My sister should get a kick out of this one. Bringing back old memories.