Disintegrating Dreams

Disintegrating dreams 

I find I can no longer stand
as this ground about me shakes with might.
Thunderous hooves of imaginary wild horses,
panting in heavy breaths, kicking dust before soiled eyes,
claiming to take down fences
of wire and stick, laying waste in sun dried foot prints
creating a mosaic of dream-like designs.
Spiraling uncontrolled as the artist fades like fall colors,
still trapping hopeless romantic thoughts 
locked within reach and just out of sight.

Challenging the earth to steady the plates
suspended above me on thin shafts of deep desire,
spinning like clocks in an opposite direction
telling time it has no place here.

Finding that truth is the enemy, I pull the drapes knowing
doorways will caress thresholds that keep out the draft, 
yet allow the sunlight to mimic the scattered shade cooling the needs
beneath a paper fortresses . . . and my heart sighs.

For this is life, in its starkest reality,
and what was pictured in youth lingers in the minds of the old.
Pasting cobwebs for effect and smiles not as genuine as they may seem,
days pass and with them opportunities fly like a crying dove
as morning light counts another moment away from this existence.
Why does it seem that endless possibilities end, forever wishes
drown at the bottom of the well amidst even older pennies,
patina claims the skin in the name of a love
found but not shared, carried upon shoulders,
as nothing else is left but to wait . . . 

while my dreams no longer wait for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/19/2017 7:35:00 PM
Hello Chris. As long as those imaginary wild horses are running free the dreams will never disintegrate. They will remain alive. And yes, dreams don't wait we make it happen and come true. Unfortunately we have to give a little push. You truly have a way with words in this entry Chris. Honestly. Well done throughout.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/20/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lisa for all of your kind words about my poem. I am beyond thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 2/3/2017 1:02:00 PM
I used to think my dreams no longer waited for me.... when I was 16 and I had lived 16 years plus at least 1000. I thought a future didn't exist. Sometimes I still don't. Close your eyes, dream, let hordes of wild horses run before your eyes, paint with words a world for yourself, create your music, and live.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2017 1:18:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend, that is some good advice. I appreciate you stopping by today and reading and leaving such nice comments for me.
Date: 2/3/2017 12:49:00 PM
The depth of this poem and all the emotions and longings you captured is amazing. I think this is one of your best poems. Beautifully written, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Christy. That means a lot coming from a amazing poet like you. Thanks for this smile I am wearing.
Date: 2/3/2017 12:11:00 PM
"patina claims the skin in the name of a love...while my dreams no longer wait for me". Chris...These two lines resonate!! well done!! You create life with your words... Big Hugggs!! Deb
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Date: 2/3/2017 12:31:00 PM
Wow Deb, thanks so much my friend. I am thrilled this one touched you. I truly appreciate your kind words to me. Thank you again for always bringing a smile to my face.
Date: 2/3/2017 11:46:00 AM
Truth is the enemy...That hits deep and hard Chris..We qll hqve some enemies when we face our triuths..but we shall never let any dark reality defeat us..We can still paint in colours ..and dream ...in all that is beajtiful..Re reality...Im sure there is an enemy in truth...but there is even the friend...I feel sadness here dear friemd.
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Date: 2/3/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Charmaine. Sometimes it just feels like that, you find that a about truth something or someone is not what you expected it to be or not what you were told. This is really just a poem, just a stream of thoughts, not so much my reality. Thank you again my friend.
Date: 2/3/2017 10:12:00 AM
A canvas of poetry painted with colors supreme dear, Chris! Excellent my friend, A seven!
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Date: 2/3/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Demetrios. I appreciate your kindness today and every day my friend.
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