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Written on January 25, 2024

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standing up in a class of fifty, offering her answers, quite gently, will the professor think she’s nifty, or will he think of her differently, she blushes, though she isn’t shifty, discombobulation, incidentally, answering, she mumbles – befuddled, oh, no, her answers are muddled! Walking home from class, gusts blow. She feels her dress rise off her form, Baring her rear, all red – she does glow, Embarrassed as can be by the storm, She hopes no one will see this show – Oh, her cheeks do feel moderately warm, Will anyone notice her mortification? Her naked bottom brings quite a sensation. when she reaches her destination, she finds, not only was her bottom seen, but snapped, by a sneaky camera, who always reminds – those awkward moments, when unwrapped, prompt the owner to turn shades of red in all kinds, marking these days where there’s laughter to be kept, so, at least, her embarrassment is a reflection, often found in some comedian’s photo collection!

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Date: 1/26/2024 5:41:00 AM
I bet someone used Instagram. Lovely poem.
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Date: 1/25/2024 2:23:00 PM
not actually seen this form of poetry, dear Gina. Oh my--a named bottom would be discombobulating! A flowing read and great for the contest, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/25/2024 11:47:00 AM
Great use of the form, one I have not written yet... but it seems similar to dizain and rispetto.. Great idea for this contest..
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