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Discarded a True Story of Healing

A song by the Allman Brothers, titled Melissa, I was, hearing Sweet Mellisa over and over, while writing this. The Story begins as a teenaged College student is informed by her Doctor that she is pregnant. Her thoughts began to overwhelm her. Thoughts of telling her parents, and afraid, of their reaction. Would they be disappointed in her, or even be angry? A myriad of thoughts developed. She thanked the Dr and headed home. She sat her Mother and Father down, and broke down in tears relating, the results of the Doctors visit. Her mother insisted on aborting the Fetus, she said, "The timing was wrong, and her college and career were more important to finish." "The child would be a great hindrance in her life." Those were her mothers discouraging thoughts. She was falling apart, and sad, as she knew that her mother was adamant about the Abortion, and she insisted on her having it. She pleaded with her mother but there was no resolve. Scared, she gathered enough courage to make it to the clinic. Her heart was torned as she knew her baby's life was going to be terminated. They sedated her and infused a saline solution to terminate her baby's life. The Nurses took her Fetus and Discarded it into a container to Throw away. Hours later one of the nurses heard a faint cry. She realized the Fetus was Alive. They hurried the Fetus into ICU. She Was Alive, but was fighting with every breath of her being, to stay alive, having seizures, and reactions to the Toxic Solution. Her Mom, was not told, she was adopted and was named Mellisa. At the age of fourteen Mellisa found out her parents had tried to abort her. Depression and heartache took over her. Her pain of not being wanted, laid heavy on her heart, for many years. Wanting closure, Mellisa spent a decade trying to find her parents. Mellisa's days of suffering, were about to end, as she finds her birth mom. She was totally emotional, but she needed to resolve her heartache and seek the truth. She found out her dad had died. With her mother, they both broke down, and the rivers of tears began flowing. Melissa learned the truth and realized her mother loved her and did not want to have the abortion. It was comfort to her ears. After thirty years of guilt, not knowing Melissa had lived, her mom's guilt was finally over, and her broken heart began the process of healing. Mellisa and her Mom began the journey of healing together. Read You Carried Me A Daughters Memoir by Mellisa Ohden. Michael Tor

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Date: 3/17/2024 11:20:00 PM
Hello Michael I see I have commented here Before..Such a powerful narrative..I did a write Not long ago about a lady named Glenda Sue You might be interested in reading it? May God bless you.'
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Date: 8/2/2022 10:51:00 PM
What a story here this can only be a miracle and a window onto God's action of how he reaches through time And human events, why do we not see more of His various interventions? I see it as Humanity And a lot of academia has shut the door on God Also the (medeiums) who run in the (media) And hide thei work in open sight within that mantle have a lot to do here..as covid was being pushed 2020 I stood at a TV told panicking familiy I had been warned years before read the medium writes on my page
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Date: 8/3/2022 7:19:00 AM
I will Joe, I will stop by my friend. Your message is spot on Joe. I appreciate your views. God bless you my friend and thanks again... for stopping by.
Date: 8/1/2022 8:40:00 PM
A very touching story.... of a teenage girl getting pregnant and being compelled to abort the fetus .Though unwilling, she had to succumb to the pressure from her mother. But the story takes a miraculous turn. The fetus expelled out was seen with trace of life. Its miraculous coming back to life, her growing up, finally her discovery of her true mother and their starting a new life together.... all flash before our eyes as on a large screen. A great story, dear Michael with a message that each baby has a right to live.
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Date: 8/2/2022 8:14:00 AM
Valsa your wonderful conclusion is the conclusion derived from someone who has the kind heart and spirit of love residing in them any other conclusion, would in my humble opinion, be the opposite of that. In reality there are several victims when the aborted fetus does not survive. They are the fetus and the mother, and father. The fetus for the obvious and then the mother and father, in time, most realize what they have done, and a deep sorrow manifests in them of guilt. Many suffer a lifetime from their choice.The good news is the Lord forgives and they can find healing through his mercy. God bless you Valsa and your support I appreciate so much, thank you, and may the good Lord richly bless you...
Date: 8/1/2022 2:27:00 PM
Michael I'm so glad we have started reading each others poems you have some amazing poetry and as for this narrative I love it , so many emotions within it but sentiment the main thread throughout well Penned Michael hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 8/1/2022 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, I appreciate your thoughtful thoughts. Glad you stopped by, had a busy weekend and today, I built a fenced in Pen for my dog Tavi. Spent the whole day digging holes and putting up fencing , it was hot out there and the mosquitos were having a feast on me, lol. Enjoy the rest of your week and, I will be reading more of your Poetry. Blessings...
Date: 8/1/2022 8:22:00 AM
This story has such an uplifting and beautiful ending Michael. Every life is a gift for anyone seeking a child who would gladly raise an unwanted baby. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/1/2022 8:49:00 AM
So true your words Connie. So many couples that can't have children would be thrilled to adopt a baby, plenty of those couples around. It is uplifting Connie because when the fetus lives it is uplifting when it dies it is sad. Thank you for stopping by and seeing your old friend. Seeing you always brings joy to me to know you are well. Have a nice day and I will be visiting to see your latest works...
Date: 8/1/2022 6:25:00 AM
WOW! What a story! Brilliant depiction Michael--you win every heart with the happy ending that saved a precious life. Miracles of life sustain faith.
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Date: 8/1/2022 6:42:00 AM
Thank you again Vijay your words of support are much appreciated, because they came from you. God bless you...
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Date: 8/1/2022 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your sincere comment my friend. Yes, I am so glad it was a happy ending. When I first learned of this incident it really touched me deep inside. God had different plans for this child of his. She grew up and became a Social worker counseling battered woman. Ironically Vijay she gave birth at the same Hospital that tried to take her life. Can you imagine how she must have felt returning there? She is an overcomer and a great asset to all those women she helped get through the emotional Trauma of Abuse. God can take something bad and turn it around for the good. I believe this is an example of this. It was a happy ending, but sadly there are many that cannot claim this result
Date: 7/30/2022 9:15:00 PM
Thank you for posting this, Michael. I wonder how many tens of thousands of other young ladies have a tale like this to tell. I only know a few women who've had an abortion. Every one of them had her regrets, and none of them ever wanted to have another one. Truth will out! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/31/2022 5:50:00 AM
Whether they realize it or not they are both victims. The realization of all this is, that there will be accountability for all our sins and actions before our maker. If not repented and forgiven by God, there is a price to pay, and I encourage all who have experience an abortion to get right with God before it is too late. God loves you and he will forgive you, but you must ask him to, and be remorseful. God bless you Gershon, coming over to have my dose of Gershon's wit... Thank you for your valued comment my friend...
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Date: 7/31/2022 5:42:00 AM
Gershon so true what you say my friend. I feel sad for the aborted and the person having it. It is usually a difficult circumstance they created for themselves and the easy soluting is to terminate. These women , many after the termination start questioning their decisions, and for some there is an immediate guilt felt, one that haunts them for a lifetime. So Gershon there are two victims here. So many women relate this sad story. Fortunately they can start the healing process by turning to God and asking for forgiveness and repenting. God hears them and forgives them. The aborted fetus goes straight to heaven. I pray for all involved Gershon...
Date: 7/30/2022 5:09:00 PM
wow, what an amazing story. I never heard of it before, nor of the song. Wonderful write, Michael.
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Date: 7/30/2022 5:34:00 PM
She wrote a book Andrea, You Carried Me I encourage you to read it. This is what happens when a child is not aborted. She grew up to be a social worker helping domestic violent victims. What a blessing she is to all the women she consel and helped. Now if the abortion would have been successful non of these good deeds by her would have been done. She turned out to be a wonderful human being. I wonder how many wonderful human beings have been killed and never given a chance at life. There are 73 million abortions commited world wide every year. Imagine that Andrea. So sad for everyone involved. God will be here soon... Thanks for commenting and God bless you Dear...
Date: 7/30/2022 3:17:00 PM
Hi Michael, this write has touched my heart so deeply. I don't know if it comes with getting older but I cried through most of this wonderful write, tears of joy at the end. One cannot help but feel when reading these words. iT IS SO SAD WHAT SOME WOMEN HAVE TO GO THROUGH. I am so glad it ended happily, my friend. A fave from me. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend ..... Mike.
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Date: 7/30/2022 3:21:00 PM
Mike it is a touching story and when I researched it it also watered my eyes. The great thing was that it had a happy ending. Thank you so much for your fave, I really appreciate it.
Date: 7/30/2022 1:45:00 PM
omg this story broke my heart , in two. I am glad it had a happy ending, back in those days young adults were never given the right to choose as they are today. I worked in a home for unwed moms and baby sat for young students who had chosen to keep the child, while they went back to high school, what an experience that was. Loved your poem Michael, have a great weekend, thank you for stopping by poetry
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Date: 7/30/2022 3:18:00 PM
Yes Vie it broke my heart too. I was glad it had a happy ending. Thank you so much for your valued comment.
Date: 7/30/2022 6:51:00 AM
Michael, this is an extraordinary story, one that will tear the heart out and leave it in pieces. I am relieved to hear that the story had a pleasant ending. Although the mother is the one who put her daughter in a highly precarious situation. And she has to bear the weight of the mother's guilt. The wrongdoing that this rapist committed against the defenseless mother does not include the infant. When faced with such a predicament, women are often forced to make a terrible choice. Best regards
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Date: 7/30/2022 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad for your comment my friend. I need to clarify that she wasn't raped. Which is a good thing Lasaad my comment to Victor was one that pro choice argue about terminating a life involving rape. I removed the comment to not mislead Melissa's truth in to what happened in the story my friend. I totally agree with your perspective Lasaad. I also pray for those that are brainwashed into thinking that terminating a life they can have a choice in. God's choice is, NO Termination. We have no right in commiting murder. It is that plain and simple. Any way you look at it. Right is right and wrong is wrong. I'm sorry if I offend some, but what if you that is pro choice was terminated by your parents, you wouldn't have a choice because according to your belief you would be dead. You see the irony, in this logic, and the hypocrisy in this logic... God bless you Lasaad for having courage to stand up for what you believe...
Date: 7/30/2022 5:27:00 AM
This is an incredible story, very heart wrenching and heart breaking... yet with a hopeful end. wonderful telling... God bless you - Love, Gina
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Date: 7/30/2022 9:35:00 AM
God bless you Gina for your support and the courage to stand up for the unborn that is defenseless and helpless against those that bring termination to life...
Date: 7/30/2022 2:11:00 AM
Quite a heartbreaking narrative Michael, glad the ending was a happy one. The mother put her daughter in a very difficult situation, it wouldn't be her who'd have to carry the burden of guilt. Tom
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Date: 7/30/2022 2:39:00 AM
I want to share a story Tom. True story. There was a man who died and went to heaven. His name was Jim Woodford. He was dead for 11 hours yes 11 hours. He wrote a book, Heaven an Unexpected journey. When in heaven he saw a beautiful building he asked The Angel or Christ I am not sure of which, what is that building for? The reply was that is where all the aborted babies are kept and grow, when their parents leave earth and enter heaven they are reunited again. So all those parents that have commited abortion and have asked for forgiveness will be reunited with their children and will be loved by them true story Tom...
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Date: 7/30/2022 2:25:00 AM
Gods law supersedes mans abortion law. So many people want to adopt why not have the child and let it live with an adoptive couple, it is a win win situation for all. I know so many women that have had abortions and spend the rest of their lives regretting what they have done. My heart breaks for them, so many are forced into having them, or they are young and don't realize the gravity of it all.
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Date: 7/30/2022 2:21:00 AM
Yes Tom. It was a bad situation all the way around. Abortion is a sensitive topic today. They have laws against animal abuse but in some states it is ok to kill a defenseless human being. It is one of the ten commandments not to kill, it is that simple. Would you kill a newborn Puppy?? Well killing a newborn is a hundred times worst. Regardless of what side of the fence your on. If you have killed a fetus and don't repent and ask for forgiveness you will be held accountable on Judgement day.
Date: 7/30/2022 1:14:00 AM
A nappy ending in a way. But what a trauma. I am against abortion. Glad all ended well.
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Date: 7/30/2022 2:48:00 AM
Yes Victor a Happy ending it was. Someones mistake and sin should not be corrected by the killing of a human being. Thank you Victor for your valued comment, my friend...

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