Premiere Contest WinnerDisarming Disarray

Out there
With her flair for chasing inspiration 
She draws you in her reason
Connecting dots and constellations

Tripping

She takes you by the hand
Her world as messy as her mind
You need a guide

And as you wade through her chaff
Her heaps of half thoughts
Her every whim expressed
The only thing you know for sure is

Out there exists





Date: 11.19.2019

Contest Name: Disarray

Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sirikye  Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Amazing Poem Maureen.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Hello Maureen, Congrats on the win. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 1:37 PM
Hello Maureen, Yes we are having a bright sunny day. Feeling warm. I hope you are doing well. Enjoy your day my friend.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Thank you Darlene! I forgot about this piece. A fun one to revisit. We finally have our nice weather, I hope you are able to enjoy it. xomo
Lamoureux Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Congrats for being in the top 100 new poems! Well done.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Thank you Richard! Warm hugs, xomo
Scars Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Wow amazing! Co grats sweet lady... x;-)-luloo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Lovely! xomo :),
Gauthier Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Good one, Maureen. Congrats on your POTD. Well penned.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Line, warm hugs, xomo
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 8:18 PM
I love this poem Maureen, congratulations on your POTD.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Okonkwo, xomo!
Allen Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 5:20 AM
Beautiful. Got chills
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 7:49 AM
Thank you James! :))) xomo
Kiser Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:46 AM
Beautiful and congrat's on your win.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Thank you M.L.! :), xomo
May Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Congrats on your win Mo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Thank you Joseph. Have a lovely day :) xomo
Green Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Man, look at that cool trophy next to your poem title...congrats my friend. This is a well deserved poetic achievement for an incredible poet. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so much Chris, humble hugs <3
Agustin Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:08 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. (Thanks likewise for your compliments.) God bless you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Thank You Beata! Warm hugs, xomo!
Dutta Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Big Congrats to win top on your unique poem. Blessing.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Anisha! Unique she is ;), Hugs! xomo
Kiser Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 6:48 PM
It sure does! Congratulations on your win!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 9:43 PM
Thank you M.L. ;))) xomo!
Warrior Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 9:35 AM
A double! win...much congrats! Mo...keep it up my friend...(((Hugs)))...^WW^ :o)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:06 AM
I'm stupefied! Thank you my friend, xomo!
Ligon Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 8:56 AM
Great job. Congrats!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Thabk you Juliet! xomo :)
May Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Perfect!! Well done my sweet friend!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Thank You dear! :) xomo <3
Na Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 3:48 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Maureen
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Thank you Gregory :) xomo
Dutta Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 12:11 AM
CONGRATS to win top for your wonderful poem
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thank you Anisha, xomo!
Adams Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 9:37 PM
so deserving of the trophy....congrats to you :) hugs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you Sandra! :))) hugs xomo!
Leiser Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Brilliant! I know a few people like this...congrats on your well deserved top win, Maureen! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Thank you Laura :) xomo!
Hamilton Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 4:45 PM
Way to go Mo...nice write congrats on your win!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:57 AM
Thank you John, xomo
Kitchin Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations Mo on your trophy win, a creative write!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Thank you Tania! Hugs :) xomo
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 11:49 PM
A great pleasure reading your profound poetry.. Congratulations, Maureen, on your POTD honour! Warmest wishes and regards. Blessings to you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Thank you so much Besma! It was a really fun prompt. Hugs and blessings, xomo!
Nicole Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 10:37 PM
Yes, "Out there exists" This is true. Seems this can be taken both ways. She is in need, truly needing a guide. Or, she just wants to tangle you around the maze she has created. So- you can both be lost. Tumbling about. Who knows really. You certainly have a way with words. Congratulations Maureen, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 9:16 AM
Take it as many ways as you please, please :))) I like giving words opportunity to mean as many things as they can. Thank you Brandy, xomo!
Y. Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Wow! Maureen, This is an excellent take on the contest theme. It looks like a winner too me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Alexis! Fingers crossed ;), Hugs! xomo
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