Disappearing Man

Step by step down the hall,
Head hung low, gazing down.
Healing from the fall,
hurt covered with a frown.
Others ignore him,
Drowning in the pain.
Holding you under, hope you can swim.
sitting alone in the rain.
He is an invisible boy

She dodges the remark,
Sliding past you in the hall,
Soft spoken, gentle heart
Healing from the sprawl,
too afraid to start.
Others ignore her,
Engulfed by fear,
movements a blur,
all to avoid the sneer.
She is an invisible girl.

Energy finds each other
Eyes meeting in the hall
Encased by bodies smother
Loneliness begins to loll.
Then whisked away,
Class starts anew, 
His/ her face in their minds shall play
And their minds brew.
He is an invisible boy,
She is an invisible girl.

He built up the courage,
And walked up to her
Freeing her from the cage
Her mind began to stir,
Their eyes meet,
Acknowledge for the first time
Bringing up a feeling that can’t be beat
Excitement began to climb.
The invisible girl and boy have been seen

Now together they walk
Side by side
With no fear of the talk
Their tears have dried
Hearts jump in joy
No longer afraid of the crowd
One together, girl and boy
Their heads shall not be bowed
The invisible girl and invisible boy
The girl and boy are not alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/28/2017 7:20:00 AM
This a an excellent poem, I was just lost in your different types of thoughts and feelings, I really enjoyed reading it however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 9/17/2016 7:28:00 PM
Beautiful write! Guessed wrong about who it was...so many thoughts/feelings/images from a picture!
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 9/22/2016 11:59:00 AM
Thanks abba. ^_^
Date: 9/15/2016 2:53:00 PM
This is a great poem Elissa about making friends and acceptance. If you'll permit me, You should ALWAYS walk with your head up and a smile on your face. The bigger, the better, then people will want to know what you are so happy about. Besides when you give a smile you get one back! I loved your poem:)
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 9/16/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 9/15/2016 1:58:00 PM
This is a happy poem I enjoyed reading it.
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 9/16/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Darlene
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