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dirty mosquito

Form:Balassi Stanza. On a trek to deep jungle, tired I, fell by hay bundle. a giant wild female mosquito, humming my favorite song, crossing all bounds to bang, licked me whole; dirty wild mosquito! kissed my eyes, nose, cheek. not my blood. bloody ,my love it seeks! pheromone pulls this mosquito! my sweat has this filthy stuff extra! my sweat has this filthy stuff extra! Pheromone pulls this mosquito! 28-11-2013. Written for the contest “The Balassi Stanza Contest” by Dr.Ram Mehta.

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Date: 12/22/2013 6:49:00 PM
Seductive take on the mosquito's desire. Clever. Congrats, Poet Undertaker!
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Date: 12/18/2013 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations P.U!
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:54:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 12/15/2013 1:34:00 PM
Wow, scarey! Those pheromones do it every time. lol. congrats. BG
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations Jenish xx
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:09:00 AM
I come from a place filled with Mosquitos. This one made me want to scratch *lol*. Congratulation on your win!
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:52:00 PM
Goodness Jennish LOL [everyone has to be somebodies dinner?] Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:37:00 PM
Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Jenish
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Date: 11/30/2013 1:14:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one tonight!
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Date: 11/28/2013 7:56:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Jenish
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Date: 11/29/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Dr.Mehta. (: ) Jenish.
Date: 11/28/2013 2:19:00 PM
Interesting poem! Good luck in Dr Mehta's contest! I posted a question for you under your blog entitled "Poets - an Institution" re the contest you are offering and am still awaiting an answer. Please respond! Have a nice day!.
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Date: 11/29/2013 6:59:00 AM
John, i have replied there.Good luck in my contest. (: ) Jenish.