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Dirty Mosquito

Form:Balassi Stanza.

On a trek to deep jungle,
tired I, fell by hay bundle.
a giant wild female mosquito,
humming my favorite song,
crossing all bounds to bang,
licked me whole; dirty wild mosquito!
kissed my eyes, nose, cheek.
not my blood. bloody ,my love it seeks!
pheromone pulls this mosquito!
my sweat has this filthy stuff extra!
my sweat has this filthy stuff extra!
Pheromone pulls this mosquito!

28-11-2013.
Written for the contest “The Balassi Stanza Contest” by Dr.Ram Mehta.

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Juliet Ligon December 22, 2013 at 6:49 PM Seductive take on the mosquito's desire. Clever. Congrats, Poet Undertaker!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole December 18, 2013 at 8:28 PM Congratulations P.U!

Sara Kendrick December 18, 2013 at 9:54 AM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Barbara Gorelick December 15, 2013 at 1:34 PM Wow, scarey! Those pheromones do it every time. lol. congrats. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 15, 2013 at 8:24 AM Congratulations Jenish xx

Richard Lamoureux December 15, 2013 at 8:09 AM I come from a place filled with Mosquitos. This one made me want to scratch *lol*. Congratulation on your win!

Debbie Guzzi December 14, 2013 at 7:52 PM Goodness Jennish LOL [everyone has to be somebodies dinner?] Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta December 14, 2013 at 7:37 PM Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Jenish

Andrea Dietrich November 30, 2013 at 1:14 AM I enjoyed reading this one tonight!

Dr.Ram Mehta November 28, 2013 at 7:56 PM Thanks for the entry, Jenish Poet. Undertaker November 29, 2013 at 7:00 AM Thank you Dr.Mehta. (: ) Jenish.

John Beharry November 28, 2013 at 2:19 PM Interesting poem! Good luck in Dr Mehta's contest! I posted a question for you under your blog entitled "Poets - an Institution" re the contest you are offering and am still awaiting an answer. Please respond! Have a nice day!. Poet. Undertaker November 29, 2013 at 6:59 AM John, i have replied there.Good luck in my contest. (: ) Jenish.