Dirty

I watch you pull at the sheets, 
tugging my hair and in a pattern of expectations
-you always meet.
Nails in my skin, digging deep. 
Welts building up, and sounds break our heavy silence,
I knew what you wanted from what I could see.
Sin clouds our pure, clean minds,
I look up at your hand intertwined in mine.
Hell yeah, this is it.. out of breath I gasp in air, 
you're loving this, pulling at my hair.
To get a little dirty is never a bad thing,
when you're searching to please.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Magee-Dittberner Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 10:00 PM
I hate this. It's not bad, good imagery and sensory language, but I hate it. You wrote it very well! Great job =) I just hate it. You're a healer, and I hate that.
Huddleston Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 4:49 AM
Thank you(:
Huddleston Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:02 PM
You actually hate it? :/ And what do you mean a healer?
Sweetheart Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 8:08 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as u continue to share creative poetry with luv.. a true gem ...
Huddleston Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 4:49 AM
Thank you(:
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