Dirt and Pride

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 If you grew up in a mining town like Tamaqua, Pa., you'd understand the pride one felt in a blue collar town of hard working, family oriented people. If there was an accident, the neighbors converged on the home with food and moral support for the family. If there was a parade, almost the entire town turned out to watch. The shop owners were also family and friends. You were never a number in a bank or department store. Yes, there was a Utopia. At the time we didn't know it.
I watched them go to work each morning
A kid growing up in the coal regions
Remembering the dirt and the pride
The self respect that came from earning 
The self reliance and the sense of community
I never knew the need to knock on a door
My dad’s keys were in the ignition of the old Ford
Kids playing baseball with taped up baseballs 
Carpenter’s nail holding the bat together
And eight gloves between seventeen kids
Catcher didn’t need one
Wednesday afternoons the miners filled the bars
Sunday mornings they filled the churches
I watched them coming home each late afternoon
A kid growing up in the coal regions
Remembering the dirt and the pride
Blackened faces smiling
Another rugged hard day in, walking proud
Wrestle with the kids, family time
The important things
I watched them converging on a home
A kid growing up in the coal regions
Remembering the dirt and the pride
Mining accident, covered dishes, neighbors
One town, one neighborhood, one family
A feeling of belonging, community, our town
Clothes lines, party lines, coal mines
The dirt and the pride. TAMAQUA.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/1/2012 12:30:00 AM
vince, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Vince. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 4:23:00 AM
Superb writing Vince. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 5/25/2009 4:34:00 PM
the men and women of america will be proud when your book gets published
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Date: 5/16/2009 10:17:00 PM
Classic words dedicated to a working neighbourhood and living community, James
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Date: 5/9/2009 1:19:00 AM
A wonderful write...The beauty starts from the title... Farah
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Date: 5/6/2009 5:19:00 PM
Wow very moving piece! -Alley
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Date: 5/4/2009 10:15:00 AM
Awesome Write. These Memories Are Ones To Cherish. Sometimes I Wish I Could Have Witnessed This Myself.
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Date: 4/27/2009 5:20:00 PM
Vince, I enjoyed your poem. It reminded me of a movie that I saw I think it was called "Born to Dance" Anyway, the setting was a mining town. The sense of unity between families and community were so strong. Just like you described in your poem. Keep writing. And thanks for your comment on my poem. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/27/2009 1:06:00 PM
hard workers,love for GOD AND love for family-those were the days---the dirt and the pride-i love this verse,the pride in dirtying hands to earn a living,mostly appreciated----bravo and thanks for your kind comments---charma
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:38:00 AM
A proud group of noble warriors ... the true heroes of civilization sexistence. Praises for the praise.
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:29:00 AM
You capture me once again....and the line that pops out among all your wonderful words is, ...."The important things"....wow...that says it all. Such a simple statement, however something seems to have been lost over the years in today's world...the things that are truly important, aren't always so cherished anymore. Great poem...dirt and pride...yes!
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