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Dinner On the Redneck Riviera

Cuter than a June bug was Blossom Bubba's hound had a nose for possum Bush moved and they watched it shake Not a possum, dadgum snake Bubba took aim, results were awesome Tweren’t the end of Blossom’s era Sucked out venom; used Aloe Vera Dinner was finger lickin’ Snake tasted just like chicken Felt like a Redneck Riviera *Entry for John Freeman’s limerick contest

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Audrey Haick

Date: 3/12/2011 3:11:00 PM

It's never too late to say Congratulations, my dear friend. You're so good with Limericks! Enjoyed this and I'm sure JohnMoses did as he read it! Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 4:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Sunflower Poetess

Date: 3/8/2011 6:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win in John's contest. Very funny limerick deserving a first place win. Love, gf

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/8/2011 4:19:00 PM

Congrats on a well written, well deserved First Place win, Carolyn. Excellent. Nice going. Thanks for your gracious comments. luv Ralph

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 3/8/2011 2:26:00 PM

A pretty funny one and a well deserved 1st.place win and thanks for my congrats.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your splendid 1st place win in John's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 3/8/2011 9:51:00 AM

Excellent job Carolyn, Congratulations on your worthy poem's first place honor. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 3/8/2011 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations! A very well deserved win, Carolyn. Jack : ) Yes, Dr Ram is a very interesting chap. Everyone on this site seems very friendly and nice. I'm glad I joined. Friends run a sort of writers' group, with a magazine every other month, and are always saying how unresponsive their members are. Janie and Cass would love this group - but they don't like poetry...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/8/2011 4:24:00 AM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/8/2011 3:52:00 AM

Oh sucks I so don't want to have dinner at that place Carolyn :) Congratulations on your awesome 1st place win my friend, love Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/8/2011 1:25:00 AM

bestest of the best, carols... laurels and CONGRATS for bagging no.1 here..:) huggs, nette

Sidney Beck

Date: 3/8/2011 1:08:00 AM

very witty and I loved the drawling accent and the guy called Bubba....... a well deserved win for an excellent writer....with sincere admiration ...Syd

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/8/2011 12:17:00 AM

A real funny one. huge congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 11:03:00 PM

A cute one that I somehow never got around to seeing, Carolyn. A BIG congrats to you. LUv, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 3/6/2011 1:25:00 PM

LOL - brilliant! Glad you liked my limericks : ) Jack

Louis Rams

Date: 3/5/2011 9:28:00 AM

this is comical ! what is a redneck fire alarm box ? a tin of jiffy pop popcorn hanging above the doorway.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 11:31:00 AM

I am stopping by just to thank you for your kind comments Carolyn. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/1/2011 8:54:00 PM

A couple of imaginative limericks. Snake really isn't that bad.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/1/2011 6:30:00 PM

I loved " dadgum". The vernacular is riht ther, my dear. It's been hard, but I'm here again! Thanks for everything! Love, Gerard.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/27/2011 10:38:00 PM

Speechless!!! Now there is some serious redneck creativity...does one have to drink moonshine to "suck out snake venom?" whoah! Two thumbs up that this one's the winner! Gwendolen :)

James Tate

Date: 2/27/2011 4:32:00 PM

Talk about originality, this epitomizes it. Loved the whole scenario. I wish you well in the contest. I have some red neck stuff that I may dig out one of these days. Problem is some of my best work is too long for the limits here. Oh, thanks for your comments on my Three Blind Men thing. And I felt good about you selecting it as a new fave. I got a chuckle from the piece myself, hope that is not conceit.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/27/2011 12:43:00 PM

Yikes, this one is quite witty, but I am pulling my face at the whole snake tasting like chicken line hehe ;) Good luck for John's contest.. love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 12:15:00 PM

Good one brought a good chuckle..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 2/27/2011 9:23:00 AM

H0, hardy har, har, har. This is a sure winner. I've heard that grasshoppers taste like chicken too. Think I'd rather sample the grasshoppers. Congrats on your kickass victory. Love, Dave

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/27/2011 9:18:00 AM

tee hee, sweet carols.. your wit shines in these limericks.. miss you and your insightful comments... enjoy your break and kindly check on my piece " chasing two faces, if able.." winning write for me! :) huggs, nette