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Ding Dong

It was such a lovely day in Spring, I woke up when I heard the clock start to ring, Took a shower, dressed, and put on my wedding ring, Then I heard the doorbell "Ding", Went downstairs to find a telegram that he had to sing. When he finished the number and doing his thing, I had to see how much of a tip I could swing. Not enough for him to have a fling, But, I gave him all I had without thinking. Got in the car which was finally working, Stopped at the station for a pack of "Filter King", Grabbed some chocolate cake rolls while remembering, As the cash register went 'Cha Ching', "I don't have any money...I'm such a Ding-a-Ling".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/13/2010 4:58:00 PM
Daniel, Congratulations on your HM with this fun entry. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/10/2010 8:10:00 PM
Co0ngratulations, Daniel on your HM wine. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Ding-A-Ling". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:31:00 AM
cute one , congrats on your HM
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:16:00 AM
GOOD ONE! Daniel. Congratulaions on your BIG WIN, Lainie
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Date: 8/6/2010 9:55:00 PM
well, lots of cute "ringing" rhymes in this one! congratulations on your HM. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:57:00 AM
Congrats Dan on your HM in Paula's contest with this exceptional write.. enjoy another special honor my friend.. happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 12:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Daniel. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:19:00 PM
What a cute poem for the contest! Clever!!! Will see this in the winners circle!
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:18:00 PM
This is so clever-- Finding so many rhymes then using them in a humorous and fun way-- nicely done! kris
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Date: 8/3/2010 4:39:00 PM
lol this one was funny ,, I love the ending,, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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Date: 8/3/2010 2:52:00 PM
Got a chuckle in this one..Sara
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