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Dinah-Mite

Hi Dinah-mite! What a doll you are! Dressed in your purple outfit With your long blonde hair, you are pretty! You play in your beach house, or your ski chalet You can ride your bike, or drive your car With many outfits to wear You are such a doll! Dinah-mite Hi! My Dinah-mite Are you out to play? What are you doing today? I can pose you any way I want. You’ve given Barbie a run for her money! However, I say it’s a pity That you’re not made anymore A thing of the past Dinah-mite Bye! You’re no longer here Since nineteen seventy-five So long, Dinah-mite! This is a double-odd rictameter with a senryu trailer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/19/2012 10:58:00 AM
what a fun write - and a very interesting form you've created too : )
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Date: 9/19/2012 6:18:00 AM
this rictameter form scores high with me on the rictascale, wonderful poem you have created here Robert...enjoyed...
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Date: 9/19/2012 12:23:00 AM
Very good poem!The form is new to me.
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Date: 9/18/2012 11:35:00 PM
complicated form, well penned
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Date: 9/18/2012 11:21:00 PM
You met the challenge of this form well! Thanks for sharing and thanks for your kind comments on my poems today. Caroline.
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